LydiaB

Synonyms for golden? Sort of a strange request... *skims story* Ah... I see :wink: Let's me think... Amber? Wheat/grain-colored? Tawny? Sorry, I've got nothing. On to the review! In a ...

Hello, I'm here to review your writing!! Sorry if I am a little harsh. I'm just trying to help your writing be the best that it can be and these ...

Hello, I'm here to [s]ruthlessly rip apart[/s] review your story!!! The Kings Opal I'm assuming that "Kings" is showing possession and not multiple kings here... In which case it should ...

Hello, I'm here to review *cheers* But I'm not going to be doing nit-picks this time *gasps* Instead, I'm going to be concentrating on the more in-depth aspects of your ...

Oooh, another idea? :D Let's start with some super-awesome-fun tastic nit-picks :roll: : People always told me that you only had one life to live and not to screw it ...

Ello~ I'm here to review your work! *applause* There weren't many nit-picks, and I apologize if this contradicts with other people's reviews, but here it goes: Something that will draw ...

Hey, I'm here to review your work *cheers*. From what you told me, it sound like a really interesting story-line. I hope you decide to keep it going! So, let's ...

Hey, here I am *cheers* First of all, this is a fantasy, right? Just checking, just checking... Oh yeah! I'm supposed to be reviewing. Right... I knew that... Uh... Here ...

Hey! Here's my review! First, some nit-picky stuff... And yes, I am a bit of a grammar-Natzi, so I apologize. I’d never liked keeping diaries. I think "I've" would fit ...

Okay... I guess I'll go first then... Hi! I'm glad you got a third part up now, though you might want to consider naming your pieces in parts (part three, ...

Hey, it's me again :D Even fewer errors now *cheers* but remember that these are just suggestions, mmkay? Water There is a missing period. She could make nothing out distinctly, ...

I'm just going to assume that you put in all the edits before so I don't have to read them... There were surprisingly few errors on here *cheers* but these ...

Yeah, this is my first review on this site, so I'll just see how this goes. As you can see, I tend to lean more toward the details. You probably ...