Lydia1995

Hello Stori, I really enjoyed your imagery in this, it was staggeringly beautiful and I really felt as though I was there. I did want a little more, but you ...

Hello Aspiring, I really really enjoyed this. You captivated me right from the start with the title - which was extremely intresting. I noticed a couple of typos and I'll ...

Hello Biffle! This was a good little poem. I liked the title, by the way. It is what made me want to read this in the first place. I did ...

Hey Kitrosemon! This has got the making of a great poem. You have some beautiful imagery in this but you have to watch sometimes that it doesn't become cliche. I ...

Hello Emmy! Ok so this poem was quite nice. I liked the idea that the MC or the voice of the poem wasn't just infatuated with their lover but they ...

Hello Knightly Angel! I really enjoyed your poem. Yes it was a cheesy but I pushed that aside and I really liked it :D Just one thing: All the sparks ...

Hello Hippie! This is a really nice little piece that is very well written and really keeps you on the edge of your seat. Well Done! There were a couple ...

Hello Ikafe! This was really great! Well Done! I agree with the points mentioned in Esther's comment but I have a couple of nit-picks to add to that: I said, ...

Hello Shubi! Ok so I'll get straight down with some nit-picks and specific comments and then I'll move onto more general stuff. “Whoopee!” my little angel cheered for me. She ...

Hello! I have to say that I didn't really like the first poem because it just didn't appeal to me. However I really did like the second poem. I liked ...

Hello! Ok so there were some issues with grammar in this but you would like to know whether or not you should carry this on so I won't go in ...

Hello Dragonet I am here to review as you requested! I really liked this. Ok so one thing that really bugged me... I scowled as I tried to straighten out ...

Hello Dreamy! I really enjoyed this, it was short and sweet. There was a major infodump at the beginning, spread it out a bit and this would make it funnier. ...

Hello Valentine, here is the critique as promised. Sorry that it took so long. I haven't read the previous chapters but I am pleased to say that this made me ...

Hello Maddy I am here as requested, sorry that it took so long. Firstly can I just say that I can see where Karsten is coming from, at times Talia ...