Lydia1995

Hello, Midnight. Thanks again for commenting on my work. Now I unlike Amy (Aqua) have read your first 3 chapters. I am going to correct a couple of small things ...

Hello, Welcome to YWS! Ok so first off I will talk about this as a poem. I liked it and I liked the rhythm. I found some of the rhyming ...

Hello, cosby Now I have to admit that I didn't read all of this as it was a bit long. However what I did read was very good and I ...

Hello, I really liked this! Your rhymes wern't forced and your rhythm was regular. The title had me a little confused to begin with because I thought this would be ...

Hello, as Dreamer said this is just going to be a repetition of what other people have said but I liked this poem so I had to write something! You ...

Hello Death Star, Welcome to YWS. Well firstly I liked this, it was good. I won't bother nitpicking about grammer because I have to dash in a minute. But one ...

Hello, Midnightread! Well firstly lets just say that I liked this and I would like to read on. PM me when you write more. As for a title I havn't ...

Hello! Like Amy, I really enjoyed this, it was smooth and very easy to read and the rhythm was very even and regular throughout. I also like the subject matter ...

Hello, I'm Lydia! Well first I would like to start of by saying that I really enjoyed that and that you had me hooked. PM me when you write more ...

Hello, I'm Lydia! Well first off I would like to start by saying that I liked this, it was short and to the point. My problems are the same as ...

Hello! I'm Lydia. I have to say that I really liked this and that I like Lee-Anna couldn't find anything wrong with it so well done! The only thing I ...

Hello! I like this but it is too short and sweet. Love is very complicated and one stanza just dosn't cover it. Also the word 'burry' should be 'bury' with ...

Hi, I also really liked this piece and I agree with Amy (Aqua) your rhyme scheme isn't forced which is great. I also think that you need to work on ...

Hello! Nice To Meet Yoy I'm Lydia! :P Wow you got alot of response for this poem and I have to say that this is going to get a bit ...

Hello Rebel (nice Username by the way!) :D Well as has been previously said I really liked this however I did find myself cursing your rhymes. You could use a ...