Lydia1995

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Hello, *Clicks the 'Like' button* Wow. I won't nit-pick because other have already. Though I will say that the '...'s annoyed me a little. Other than this though, I think ...

Hello Mechi. I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer for today. Firstly I would like to say that I really liked this, except for the puking in the purse, ...

Hello! I like this, I would pick it apart but homework calls... Just one thing the line But now the tears have forced themselves upon my cheeks It's a bit ...

Kamas, Well Done for writing a poem for Haiti. This is beautiful and sad and it really captures the emotion. I will have to be honest when I say I ...

Hello :) I really like this. Am I right in thinking that its from a goth or emo perspective? But anyway, I couldn't really pick fault with it except that ...

Wow! This was really great, I'm definately reading the rest! :) Gold star for you :D I have nothing more to say. It was fab apart from a few spelling ...

Hello Bekah, I agree with Jas and Zoey this idea is greatly overused. Also, it might be an idea to move this to the disscussion forum because you will get ...

Hello! Firstly I need to blurt something out. SNIONK! How dare you change your picture, you had me very confused :) Now to the poem. Well snoink got in all ...

Hello, I agree with the others, this was far to short. I didn't understand why you thought that someone cutting thier wrists was an 'attention-grabbing whore' to be perfectly honest. ...

Hello! Just a few things I found with this and then my overall comment at the bottom :D Synopsis: Frankie is a Orphan. He isn't good looking or intelligent. He ...

Hello, I liked this. I feel like I am going to be reiterating what others have said but hey. I liked it. I thought like some other reviewers that the ...

Hello, This is awesome for a first stab at poetry and I think you could make a good poet. :D I agree with BondGirl. Your rhymes were good but I ...

Hello, Firstly let me just say that I like this however it was MUCH too Twilighty, in fact it was almost as though you pulled it straight from twilight. But ...

Hello, I really liked this, the rhythm was consitent except in one place where you wrote And simple routines you go through become a crime This was a little long ...