Lunasol21

Perhaps we should not kiss tonight, Beneath the hazy silver light; Intoxicated by the fumes Of cigarettes and cheap perfume. The use of imagery here is simply beautiful. I can ...

As a big sister, this poem almost made me cry. I could find myself thinking about all the times I comforted my little sister when she was sick or was ...

It was not meant for me. It was not made of gold, or silver or wood. Crouched bitterly, you see? Hidden from your touch, your eyes if I could. Your ...

*has spaz attack and falls on floor* I LOOVVVEEE HARRY POTTER ~ Okay, I'm done. haha I really like it, but the grammar should be fixed (unless it is on ...

The truth hurts more than the scars and burns I behold. The truth is a dagger that stabs at your heart when you feel pain. A controlling feeling that makes ...

I really like how you have written the poem and the rhythm you created. These lines are my favorite : "But the gifted crumple up the paper, throw it in ...

I TOTALLY understand! Like you don't belong in this world, and the world inside your head doesn't seem to exist right? Like questioning your own existence? Well, if so I ...

Oh how I hate the stars, such small pitiful things, They ruin all the comfort, that the darkness brings. The last poem is very dark, but that makes it better. ...

[quote="SweetMoments"]Smeared with stains of regret quote] This line makes me picture a young child with blood smeared on their face; I really like it. For not being a poet, this ...

Ever wish you could start again, Flick a switch, Forget the pain, Sail across this sea of life, Free of waves, Rid of strife, I'm not one who usually likes ...