LukanRinta

I liked it a lot. You put a good amount of emotion into this small piece, but didn't overdo it. I did like the shortness though. The emotion was portrayed ...

I loved your imagery! The description of the rose, and the signifigance each characteristic played in the piece really drew the poem together! You had a strong first line, which ...

Very good. You're repetition caught me from the first glance. Though I think it would help your flow and rhythm if you changed you wording around in a few lines... ...

This was great. A very deep and touching poem. This explains so well the pain that some people find that comes with loving someone who doesn't want to love you ...

Wow. The ending was especially vivid and packed full of imagery and emotion. I loved the whole thing. This is the kind of writing that attracts me. I have to ...

I loved it. Though I could say maybe you should separate your stanzas and lines a bit better to help with the flow and rhythm(make it clearer to the reader). ...

I loved how this was written. You have very consistent and capturing rhythm here from beginning to end. I like how you mixed up a few words from what we ...

This was very good. The prologue captured my attention, and you held it from beginning to end. You focused mainly on the boy in the prologue, so you'll have to ...

I really really want to give you a full review... but this left me so terribly speechless. I seriously teared up. No lie. People tell me I have talent... My ...

Very cool. You made the reader clear on what was happening, but not straight away at the beginning. You took the time to develop full feelings for the main character, ...

It took me a few lines to get your rhythm down. And after that the poem was very entertaining. I understand why you put the commas in, though it seemed ...

Amazing. This actually gave me the chills. Very much reminded me of the subject of the book I just finished. Very coincidental lol. Now*rubs hands together* down to business. In ...

I liked the style, short and sweet, to the point. But it confused me. I know as the author you're going to blow me off because I said that(because I ...

The first time I read this, the numbers confused me. Then I realized they were to mark the lines and I read it over again. Your work here is truly ...

This was really cool. I like how you didn't have a rhyme, and you had what I call a rhythm for lack of a better word, but it was scattered ...