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Re: Poison Lines
Hey! The poem is really good. Poetry can be two things, fun or meaningful. You really hit meaningful on the head! I reallly like the name of the poem and ...
May 21, 2016 -
Re: Missing What You've Never Had
Hello! A short review for you. This poem is really cute, and I like the way it`s structured. Just a few points to make. (1) I think it could be ...
May 8, 2016 -
Re: After the delay
Hello! I will call this a review because its kinda long, even though its only one point i have to make. This poem is really beautiful , and sweet, and ...
Apr 20, 2016 -
Re: I like you
OMG! I really love...this poem!! I think its really sweet and really describes some girls or guys emotions when It comes to long-time crushes. I also love the way you ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: The Red Bird
Hey, AliceAfternoon! I think your poem is really cute, but I do have two things to say. First, your poem is short, and it was probably meant to be short. ...
Apr 5, 2016 -
Re: This Old Porch Swing
Hey!! I really like this poem. It`s really sad and sweet. I would improve a couple things though. First off, your writing this poem as a story, which is totally ...
Apr 4, 2016 -
Re: Writer's Block
Hey there, Keepwriting!!! This poem is really cute and I can agree with a lot of the things you say. I really like how you use Imagery to descibe a ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Blue Eyes
Hello, FearlessLove4. My first point is, this is a really beautiful piece. Do you already have the notes or just a mental-melody sort of thing. I love music and would ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Eye of the Beholder
OMG!!! This is a really beautiful poem, and I really like it. I really like that line about the hoody she/he stole from him/her(I just confused myself. forget that!). I ...
Apr 3, 2016
