LovelessSummer

I'm sorry, I can't even attempt to read this. It's way too long-I find myself saying this a lot-. I'm sure this edited version is wonderful, I believe I've read ...

*He looked up at me and to my I looked down...* To your what? *log-cabin-(l)ike* *snowy capped Mountains ski resort* If Snowy Capped Mountains is the name of the resort ...

Okay, since everyone else corrected the few mistakes I saw, I'm just going to review you on the story itself. The beginning was nice and very descriptive. I love the ...

Ah, Matt, simply your name bring tears to my eyes! This poem was amazing, though I think part of the last stanza seemed kind of forced. I didn't read as ...

Hi, Loveless here! I hope your day has been filled with Panda bears and muffins! Haha! Ben, my friend, I'm sure your story is just overflowing with brilliance, but it ...

Hello, Emi! Loveless here! Well, you have a minor capatilazation issue. You sometimes used caps in the middle of the sentence, forgot to put caps on proper nouns, and at ...

Number two and number six! Definately! You must choose those, they are simply beautiful! Well, I suppose I like number four also. Two, six, and four! Wait, only two? Well, ...

Haha, on the first of next month you are all mine! This is such a cool game and it's so ridiculosly cute how you stood up in class and did ...

Ha ha! This may be the funniest thing I've read all day! You should really start a blog though, it would be more approiate. Aside from the whole to blog ...

Hi, Loveless here! This was a nice poem; it sent out a really good, thoughtful message. The tone of it was set very nicely, well, I think it was. It ...

Hello, Fries! You had a good concept; a wonderful message, one that someone could really ponder over. Though the message is wonderful, your rythm is off. It didn't flow very ...

Hello, Tashi! Loveless here! You used these ---> "..." way to much. There is a such thing called a comma, it can replace those many times in your story. The ...

Ofir, congradulations! This was amazing; full of emotion, power, and a harsh sense of reality. It really shows how people change as they get older. Your character was very developed, ...

I wouldn't want to be famous either. It's too much pressure, and I don't like being watched. You have to think and re-think your every move. Some people as kids ...

Well, I don't know about anyone else, but I take the term "emo" very offensivly. And I'm prepared to give a speech about said word. *clears throat* Emo is taken ...