LoveableLittleSock

Kiss me once; hurt me twice. Just one time And I’ll be okay. One kiss and it’ll be over At least, for you. - Ugh. Bastard. End my wanting. End ...

I start the journey through the grass, Smell flowers and dampness as I go, Through all the memories in my mind, One sticks with me through and through. - Oooh. ...

You were there for me, when I needed a shoulder. You guided me, when I was lost. You led me to safety, helping me to stay strong. - No 'to'. ...

And with a whimper only it can hear, the world ends. - Oooh - Gripping!! There are no cries of grief, nor any of triumph, there is only that omnipresent ...

Running around, in side of my head. Are things that are better left unsaid. Words are forgotten, and dreams are shed. But sugar plum daisies dance in my head. - ...

It rhymes... Oh. Hah. I didn't notice. I liked it though - it shows that sprucing up your outside won't change who you are inside, and no one can change ...

Broken glass... so creepy, but you make it so deep! I love who you worded this entire poem. You stick with your subject and make it more meaningful with every ...

I totally get it. Your father passed away. Your famliy ate at the wooden table, where you and your father spent most of your time bonding. LOVE IT! So catchy. ...

In the deep, lonely forest, the birds sing their solemn serenade. A string of wind blows, heaving a burden of stories. OMG. BEST FOUR LINES IN THE FRIGGIN WORLD. Birds ...

You did a great job on this! Although - you said mothers wombs are liquid havens... like oceans teeming with life. I thought you said water was death... so that ...

Oooh - the rhyming was pretty. I liked it. "You're the only comfort that fits." I was like, "AWWWW." The clock ticks 12:35 My phone tells me 12:32 On with ...

I wanna laugh. Was this poem supposed to be humorous? limbs quake and fingers hurt from the non-stop tap-tap-tap at the keyboard. I liked that stanza. Its clever how you ...

Oooh - nice poetry. I liked your use of repetition. Fairly clever. Can't we stop the madness? Save the people from the sadness Life needs to go on not end ...

I like the cake similie. I feel the same way! Cakes are not meant to be cut! You have to take like, 15 pictures of the cake THEN cut it. ...

Wow - I enjoyed your poem a lot. But I didn't get the last part as much as I should have... For the pearl’s alias is “Sorrow Stone”, And, though ...