LoveableLittleSock

I had a little sister called May, She would cry for the whole day. - Replace 'whole' with entire Once her puppy laughed, She tore it in half, - SHE ...

Whispers proclaim The lasting sound, Of treetops swaying Like the ground, - Nice ryhme Beneath my feet That try to move, Much faster than The beating of, My cold and ...

I crept to the room slowly, a hesitant shadow, his arms outstretched, beckoning, a bloody indication, silent save the occasional gulp, - Put a comma after silent. eyes wide with ...

I sit, a Disney Princess coloring book on my lap. "Dear God... Once, I wanted to be a princess. Truly? I still do. Maybe you could lend me your shiny ...

In the heart of a heartless night the black of the rain, or the grey of the wind, never chills her. - Oooh. To in rain, back in rain, colder ...

Fly softly over my fields When you shake your feathers loose Sing slowly down Lilting On frozen air like slices of glass - nice stanza. Sit softly by my window ...

I can be your nightmare In shining amour. The only reason I live is so that one day, - Shouldn't "i live" be on the previous line? I can die ...

I have a sister I have known her since birth When I look in her eyes I see mine looking back Her hair is blonde and long - Couldn't you ...

Inhale. The lights around me grow soft Through my closed eyelids I can see the sun falling The wind around me is smooth, sweet Gently caressing my ears as if ...

Flowering and forming to fit a set mold. Stretching and squeezing into an impossibly small space. Frustrated, I strike my encasement, the beautiful glass cage splits a spider web of ...

Your eyes are bloodshot Your skin sickly and pale - I like how you didn't say "IS sickly and pale" its annoying when people do that :) The drugs are ...

Death came swiftly that Midsummer's night; I doubt such a young girl could put up much a fight. A sick minded murderer, A cold hearted man, to take a girl's ...

Please be gentle, I wrote this when I was 12. You stole away my childhood My dreams, my heart, my soul I became so distant My mind became so cold ...

Even the smell of the bus is starting to feel like home My house is just somewhere that makes me want to be alone People know me too well there ...

Friend, To every heart I have ever broken, to every friendship I have ruined, to every mean thing I ever said, it all comes down to the last two words ...