Louisiana15

This was full of beautiful imagery! As I was reading, I thought of life: with the dawn of the day, there is the anointing of a new life. Just born ...

I have to agree with LadyBird, don't put the author's note; it takes away from the quality of a work. By using "I" and "you", you almost force the reader ...

I was a bit lost because of the spelling and grammatical errors. There are commas where there shouldn't be and that takes away from the flow of, and thus the ...

Hello :) Death; a commonly-used theme in poetry (Edgar Allan Poe, for example). Typically, Death is described as masculine, have you noticed that? I liked how in this poem, Death ...

The use of personification is wonderful! I love the metamorphosis from human to part-wolf to true-wolf; it adds considerable emotion to your work as each form pertains to a certain ...

For a first piece, wonderfully written! Poetry does not always have to have a grammatical structure. Many famous poets use what's called 'freestyle'. There doesn't have to be a rhyme ...

I see this piece through a political stance--it's almost satirical in a way. Patriarchal societies can be extremely oppressive and I can almost imagine women "flying into the end of ...