Lost_in_dreamland

six Welcome to YWS superboii57, here we have a rule that for every piece you post you must review two pieces. That might be why you have no reviews on ...

five Hey there Princess, I'm Kirsten, don't think I've formally met you before, so hi! Anyway, I'm going to go over the actual poem and then a little critique, okay: ...

Four Hi, welcome to YWS, I'm Kirsten and I shall review this piece for you today. Note: This is rather short, in future you may want to expand on pieces ...

Three Hi there, I like to pick on random pieces to review, and yours happened to be the one at the top of the page on the random generator thing. ...

two I'm trying to do one hundred reviews in five days, so that's the reason for the number. xD Okay, I liked this poem, it is one of those light ...

one Evi! Looks like you are to be the first in my hundred review thing. ;) So, shall we stop this pointless chatter and do some reviewing? I think I ...

Hey there Kamas, you asked me to review some of your stuff, so I come to humbly do so. xD and please excuse me if I accidentally miss out a ...

Hey there Krupp. I have a habit of picking on random pieces to review, so that's how I came across your piece. Please excuse me if I miss out a ...

Hey there, I like to pick on random pieces, cease them for several five minute segments and then throw them back at the author. Please excuse me if I miss ...

Hey there, Serendipity. xD This poem was an interesting one. I believe this to be a short, fun poem, written for no other purpose than for the fun of it? ...

Hey there, Colleen. I'm going to do a quick run over of the actual piece, and tehn we'll get onto comments, 'kay. I'm sorry if I accidentally miss out letters ...

Hi Dearie, welcome to YWS. Well done for doing two reviews before posting a piece of your own work, it's fairer for everyone that way. Now, I enjoyed this poem, ...

Hi world be very afriad, that's a bit long, perhaps I could call you WBVA? Anyway, I am here to review, seeing as no one else has. I'm glad to ...

Hey Galerius, here as requested. Sorry it took so long. I really, truly adored this poem, indeed I probably use that line too much but seriously, I loved it. Now, ...

Hey there, you're fairly new so... Hi. You can't post this here I'm afraid. You'll need to either post this in Advanced critiques or break it down into small parts ...