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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Lighthouse - Prologue

    Lighthouse Authors Note: The Prologue may seem a bit cliche but you have to remember it is supposed to be innocent and it is a child in the beginning. Sorry, ...

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sister

    You are so substantial; you fill up their hearts and my face is darkened by your shadow. Great starting stanza. I am so fragile flitting in the wind, your hug ...

    Dec 23, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Ripper's Accomplice

    ‘’Urry up, sir, it’s freezing!’ called Ellen, tactlessly loud. She was drinking some porter in a flask, what her master’d given her that evening. Humming a tune, she felt the ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: [deleted]

    We had to write something in English mirroring 'The Boy In Striped Pajamas'. It's a bit simplistic compared to the over-descriptive approach I normally take, since it's from the eyes ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: --

    Author's Note: I have divided this story into two posts, because of its length. I never really intended it to be so long! Anyways, this is only the first half. ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Other » General, General Re: Marcus And His Mysterious Travels: The Window Escape

    Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:04 am Post subject: Marcus And His Mysterious Travels: The Window Escape -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So here is my first

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Understanding

    Ok, this is my first post. I really hope you like it. I would like to continue it, but for now, all I want is criticism! I'm here to improve ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Letter

    You know, it is possible to love someone so much that you destroy yourself in the process. You have only to read ‘Wuthering Heights’ to know that. So true. I ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Fairborough - Part 1

    Right, so this is my first story to be submitted - so please don't be too mean! Er, so it's a bit contrived, I guess, and pretty hard-going for the ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What is the Best Book you have read...

    Wuthering Heights of course :D What can I say... Emily Bronte is my deity :lol: I adore her. Gosh, there's so many Villette by Charlotte Bronte -Hardly anyone likes it ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Poison Love Chapter 4

    Chapter Four While I waited for Odette to come home, I busied myself by alternating reading my book and cleaning my room. My room was decorated with dark colors such ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Well this shouldn't be! Chapter 2

    Well this shouldn't be! Chapter 2 Now my dear readers, gaze upon the poor goblins. Now they walk in the dark and ancient tunnels of the underworld. And they walk, ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Bloodlust

    Enjoy! (: ------------------------ Silence: I agree. Don't start with silence, it's cliched and doesn't flow nicely with the rest of the story. In fact I don't think you need the ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Deleted

    Those small bands of gold stare you in the face wherever you go. I really like this as an opener, I have very controversial opinions when it comes to words ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Poison Love - chapter 3

    Chapter three I walked into the study and shut the door behind me. Okay; to be honest I don't think you need that line at all. It is pretty redundant. ...

    Dec 20, 2008


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