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Re: Lighthouse - Prologue
Lighthouse Authors Note: The Prologue may seem a bit cliche but you have to remember it is supposed to be innocent and it is a child in the beginning. Sorry, ...
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Re: Sister
You are so substantial; you fill up their hearts and my face is darkened by your shadow. Great starting stanza. I am so fragile flitting in the wind, your hug ...
Dec 23, 2008 -
Re: The Ripper's Accomplice
‘’Urry up, sir, it’s freezing!’ called Ellen, tactlessly loud. She was drinking some porter in a flask, what her master’d given her that evening. Humming a tune, she felt the ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: [deleted]
We had to write something in English mirroring 'The Boy In Striped Pajamas'. It's a bit simplistic compared to the over-descriptive approach I normally take, since it's from the eyes ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: --
Author's Note: I have divided this story into two posts, because of its length. I never really intended it to be so long! Anyways, this is only the first half. ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Marcus And His Mysterious Travels: The Window Escape
Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:04 am Post subject: Marcus And His Mysterious Travels: The Window Escape -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So here is my first
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Understanding
Ok, this is my first post. I really hope you like it. I would like to continue it, but for now, all I want is criticism! I'm here to improve ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: The Letter
You know, it is possible to love someone so much that you destroy yourself in the process. You have only to read ‘Wuthering Heights’ to know that. So true. I ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Fairborough - Part 1
Right, so this is my first story to be submitted - so please don't be too mean! Er, so it's a bit contrived, I guess, and pretty hard-going for the ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: What is the Best Book you have read...
Wuthering Heights of course :D What can I say... Emily Bronte is my deity :lol: I adore her. Gosh, there's so many Villette by Charlotte Bronte -Hardly anyone likes it ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love Chapter 4
Chapter Four While I waited for Odette to come home, I busied myself by alternating reading my book and cleaning my room. My room was decorated with dark colors such ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Well this shouldn't be! Chapter 2
Well this shouldn't be! Chapter 2 Now my dear readers, gaze upon the poor goblins. Now they walk in the dark and ancient tunnels of the underworld. And they walk, ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Bloodlust
Enjoy! (: ------------------------ Silence: I agree. Don't start with silence, it's cliched and doesn't flow nicely with the rest of the story. In fact I don't think you need the ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
Those small bands of gold stare you in the face wherever you go. I really like this as an opener, I have very controversial opinions when it comes to words ...
Dec 21, 2008 -
Re: Poison Love - chapter 3
Chapter three I walked into the study and shut the door behind me. Okay; to be honest I don't think you need that line at all. It is pretty redundant. ...
Dec 20, 2008
