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No, this can’t be happening.” Jack Sanders moaned. He had been up all night, searching through the files he had smuggled home with him from the secure government building where ...

Just the beginning of something longer. John was born on a large brass bed. 1 His mother could just make out the pale curve of her high, damp forehead in ...

My reviewing system may seem a little different, but hopefully you'll get it after a while xD Chapter one 10/19/08 Dear diary, That’s so boring. Dear diary? I’m sure I ...

Hello Helen xD My reviewing system might seem quite strange at first, but it's easier once you get used to it :) The numbered parts are mentioned at the bottom, ...

So, I've finally managed to work on characterisation. I haven't worked it into this chapter explicitly, because this is where something finally happens, so it would be silly to suddenly ...

Eurchh, I know this chapter is probably a bit too soppy and lurv-filled for some of my faithful readers, but trust me, teen-romance is not going to be the objective ...

Sarah. This, was incredible It truly was. Helen's state of mind, her constant questioning of herself and the world. Everything. It's perfect. To think that you wouldn't have posted this. ...

Hey there tkonchady ;) You're new so you probably won't know this. If you have a whole novel to be reviewed you put it in advanced critiques, this means that ...

This is very experimental. I would never have posted it were it not for someone. *coughs* But I lubb her too much to decline. I accept all credit ;) I ...

I’ve grown used to the sound of the bombs. Each one echoes in my mind with a constant thrumming. I scratch my chest, and the mud caked on my skin ...

wow. This was powerful and well written. You had the perfect amount of description without having too much. You really made me empathise with Elsa, and you. Powerful and moving, ...

Author's Note: Apologies for the length of this piece! But I found that i really can't shorten it! Please, again, critique. It is much needed and much appreciated. Miss Adrianna ...

Sarah: I'm going out to the cinema for Christmas eve but when I get back I shall edit :D I've edited the last chapter; and Anne has declined the offer ...

Edited 5 times from various people's edits --- ELLEN Kassie was waiting for me outside the school gates when I hopped off the bus. Instantly, I could see how populated ...

This is a novel I have just started, set in the Victorian Times. It was previously set in 1920 but it was far too hard for me to write as ...