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Re: The end of innocence
I think this poem is FANTASTIC. Just because I can relate to it so much. This reminds me of Disney movies like Cinderella, Snow white and the seven dwarfs, and ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Hobo Billy
I liked this poem. Randomly Pulled up this piece and liked it. This reminds me of all the people that get murdered and how people get away with it. My ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Cyber Bullying; Claiming another life today.
Hi Brianna! I'm here for a review! At least, I think this is a review. The message that you are trying to say is good. Some people really don't understand ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: My First Poem
Congratulations on writing your first poem on YWS! This is by far way better then what my first poem was. What you are trying to say in the poem too ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Dandelions
I like this poem! Yaaaaass!!!!!!!!!! Let me just start of by saying what my favorite part was "Some who are not tend to piss and moan". Just because I'm very ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: Always look back.
Mitchel and Sarai here for a review (I need points). Let's see.... I like the ending because you actually described the colors that you're being struck by. Also, when you ...
May 19, 2014