Lorrilrakest.

I'm a bit skewed whether I'm shocked that you don't find Glee entertaining, or I'm glad you liked my writing. Lol, only joking - I respect people don't like it ...

Glee is awesome :):) And yeah, I didn't try really hard to be .... literary. If that's the right word to use .... :) Oh, and it was late. xD ...

Yeh, coming back to my point in the first place - "despicable" characters are fine, but it is a lot harder to make the reader read on. I'm not saying ...

Okay, im starting to understand that people are confused :] I need to capture the essence of confusion, but not to stir people away because they don't understand it. Hmm. ...

Well ... er ... thanks for the help then, fading-dream :/ A great review. I clearly stated that the whole story would not be like that, and so I hope ...

I'm glad people kind of like it now. I definitely appreciate your help rlw, I can understand how much better that makes it. And as for your question LoveLess, you ...

Right, also, do you think just writing plain descriptive text and stuff will catch the attention as well? I want to do something different, that's all, really. And also, can ...

Thanks for the feedback :] And i'm glad you like it, Jessie :] Do you think it can still "grab your attention" without references to child molestation and stuff - ...

That's cool :] I've tried loads of different beginnings and none of them really set the scene for what I wanted. I want something dark, yet sets the style of ...

hmm. write more. im not exactly intrigued - its a bit cliche. im sure if i had read more, there would have been something better quality there.

Why is it called Wallpaper btw?

Ooh, this is pretty interesting - it definitely caught my attention, and i didn't stray my attention. However, nothing particularly happens. Put a little bit more in. --- Lorril. ---

Oh i am cynical when it comes to this - i either think a piece is really good or really rubbish. I won't post stuff like that any more though ...

Oh my, write more please :) Everything's really been said, but please do write more of this whole world. Really good absurdist fiction coming along!

I'm asking here again, what gender is this guy?