LordofLit101

will do ;)

thanks for the review! well think of it this way, things like mummies, zombies, orcs, evil wizards and warlocks, have been either copyrighted or overdone, and I wanted to go ...

Thanks for the review and as always I'm glad you're enjoying the story! The telepathic voice was not another member of the four, this character comes into the next novel ...

No problem! I have a novel of my own if you want to check it out; A Scale of Power, Chapters 1-7 have been posted ;)

Will do, thanks for the feedback! Chapter Seven will be published as soon as I can get it up, but you should go back and read the first five chapters ...

Ok, changes made, does that seem a bit better?

First of all, thanks for the review! Alright so you said it was cheesy and remove the bits about the media, sure I'll get right on to that.

Hi, Sunset101! A fellow 101 here to give you a review! The rhythm of the poem was very well written and it's rather nice that you have saluted Fathers everywhere ...

Thanks for the tips and I'll make those corrections. Oh and what did you mean by get that piece out of the green room? But anyway thanks and i'm so ...

Thanks so much! I got the descriptions because I have actually been to the Alps myself (In Italy, pretty much in the shadow of Mont Blanc) and yeah they have ...

Before reading any other chapters I've posted, go back and read chapters 1-3, as it will help you understand the plotline, but I've since posted Chapter 5. The reason why ...

Happy to help, Chapter Five of my novel was posted last night if you wanna take a look, but I recommend reading the other chapters first as it will make ...

Well, if you have read the second chapter, the serum that created the Reptiliad by accident was a test vaccine to MRSA, the genetically advanced superbug. The humans thought it ...

Chapter Four is published! ;D

Well, to answer your question, normally it's USA that coms under attack, sees a load of action, blah blah blah. I wanted to take a different turn with it, anyway, ...