LordZeus

Apologies for the typos. I wrote this in a hurry.

@captainace44 I'm afraid I do not agree with your analysis of @TheSilverFox's review. Every point he said was well reasoned and with good intentions. While your piece may have been ...

@Europa you should really see this :P

@TheShadowMan multiple investigations have concluded that Hillary has committed no crime. Hillary is a diplomat who would make sure that tensions between the USA and Russia did not rise too ...

Hey artemis, thank you for your very helpful review! I will address everything you said in order: I changed the part about the basketball. Edited that typo Edited Actually that ...

Hey, thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you liked this. I have edited all the grammatical errors I have found, and added that paragraph to show the transition. However, I'm ...

Hey, thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you liked this. I have edited all the grammatical errors I have found, and added that paragraph to show the transition. However, I'm ...

@Artemis28 @artemis15c have you seen this? @childofApollo777 2 users on YWS are named Artemis, so they'd probably be pleased to see this!

Hey dropout thanks for reviewing my work. The thing is, this is one of the first works that I published on here. If you notice, its in the 5 paragraph ...

Thanks! I'm rather busy now having to balance schoolwork and 2 SBs but I will be continuing this in March. I hope you'll still be willing to read it then!

Ya I can read it.

Thanks! I have mentioned that they went on a train in the previous chapter, but i will add that to avoid confusion from people who haven't read the previous chapters. ...

Actually, if you see the date he became a member, he's been a member for 11 years. So he's not new.

Oh thanks! I never knew that my work could actually touch someone like that, though I'm pleased that it did! I'm really glad that you liked this. If you like, ...

Hey, I've edited my work. I hope I covered everything, but please check! However, I like the sentence you mentioned in the first suggestion, so I think I will keep ...