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Re: Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 1
Hey, this is LordZeus here to review for the Monarchs! Happy Review Day, by the way. I'll get right to the point. Your work is good, and shows some some ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Friend Turned Sith
Hey @AkeliaTaske ! I'm here to review for Team Potter, the greatest quidditch and reviewing team that the wizard img world has ever known! Right, now I'll get down to ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: A Modern Day Knight Chapter 8
Hey @Dragongirl, remember me? Sorry for not reviewing your chapters recently! In any case, I will be mentioning my critiques and comments as shown below: 1. “What are you doing ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 15: (Bang! Bang! Bang!) “You Can’t Kick Us Out of Lunch! We Live Here Too!” (Bang! Bang! Bang!)
Hey HolographicLadybug! Its Lord Zeus here to review for the Sanguine warriors. I have read the other chapters of this novel before, and find that it is a warm and ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Wild Fyre- Prologue
Hey Hopeless! Wow that sounded like I was insulting you. Well, Abandon (I hope that sounds better to you) this story is off to a great start! As to setting, ...
Nov 12, 2015 -
Re: Omorose prologue
Okay this is a cool story, what with the gods and everything! While ou may not have held true to the Egyptian myths, this is fiction so that's okay. You ...
Nov 5, 2015 -
Re: The Dust of Worlds:Chapter Two
Okay I have no idea why you said the previous comment. But I saw that you are actually gonna self publish this, so hats off to you! I'm glad you ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: The Dust of Worlds: Chapter One
Hey its Zeus here to review! Personally, I'm a sci-fi/fantasy writer., so I have quite some experience with sci-fi writing. First off, this story has a great plot. However, I ...
Oct 17, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 3
Hey Myth sorry I haven't reviewed your work yet, but I've been busy with school! Ok, first off, this is a good story. I'm glad you've introduced a secondary main ...
Oct 7, 2015 -
Re: A Modern Day Knight Chapter 5.
I just saw this. And I have to say, I am really, really touched. And I'm not just saying that. I never thought that people could be that thankful for ...
Oct 4, 2015 -
Re: A Modern Day Knight Chapter 4.
Hey, its the King of the Gods here to review! First off, this is a great story. It's really funny, and I'm glad to see how its developing. However, I ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: Tales of a Dead Girl
Hey its Zeus here to review for the Big Bang where, the Universe originated! Anyway, I really liked your story! It has a very interesting plot. I mean, a girl ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Protect book. code name growth. (Because it has no name yet)
Hey its Zeus here to review for the Big Bang! First off, this is a good story, and I'm already hooked on the series. Just asking, since this is science ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The New Generation--Chapter Two: Making Friends
Hi its Zeus here to review for the Big Bang! First off, this is a great story, and I'm glad that there is-finally-another PJ fanfiction here for me to get ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
Hey @ParanormalMyth, you have already reviewed two of my works, so I thought that it was time that I reviewed some of yours. I read both chapters of your new ...
Sep 27, 2015
