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LordZeus

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Z-Day: Load Up ~ Part 1

    Hey, this is LordZeus here to review for the Monarchs! Happy Review Day, by the way. I'll get right to the point. Your work is good, and shows some some ...

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Friend Turned Sith

    Hey @AkeliaTaske ! I'm here to review for Team Potter, the greatest quidditch and reviewing team that the wizard img world has ever known! Right, now I'll get down to ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: A Modern Day Knight Chapter 8

    Hey @Dragongirl, remember me? Sorry for not reviewing your chapters recently! In any case, I will be mentioning my critiques and comments as shown below: 1. “What are you doing ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Tips for Taking Over Summer Camp Chapter 15: (Bang! Bang! Bang!) “You Can’t Kick Us Out of Lunch! We Live Here Too!” (Bang! Bang! Bang!)

    Hey HolographicLadybug! Its Lord Zeus here to review for the Sanguine warriors. I have read the other chapters of this novel before, and find that it is a warm and ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wild Fyre- Prologue

    Hey Hopeless! Wow that sounded like I was insulting you. Well, Abandon (I hope that sounds better to you) this story is off to a great start! As to setting, ...

    Nov 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Omorose prologue

    Okay this is a cool story, what with the gods and everything! While ou may not have held true to the Egyptian myths, this is fiction so that's okay. You ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Dust of Worlds:Chapter Two

    Okay I have no idea why you said the previous comment. But I saw that you are actually gonna self publish this, so hats off to you! I'm glad you ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Dust of Worlds: Chapter One

    Hey its Zeus here to review! Personally, I'm a sci-fi/fantasy writer., so I have quite some experience with sci-fi writing. First off, this story has a great plot. However, I ...

    Oct 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 3

    Hey Myth sorry I haven't reviewed your work yet, but I've been busy with school! Ok, first off, this is a good story. I'm glad you've introduced a secondary main ...

    Oct 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: A Modern Day Knight Chapter 5.

    I just saw this. And I have to say, I am really, really touched. And I'm not just saying that. I never thought that people could be that thankful for ...

    Oct 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: A Modern Day Knight Chapter 4.

    Hey, its the King of the Gods here to review! First off, this is a great story. It's really funny, and I'm glad to see how its developing. However, I ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Tales of a Dead Girl

    Hey its Zeus here to review for the Big Bang where, the Universe originated! Anyway, I really liked your story! It has a very interesting plot. I mean, a girl ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Protect book. code name growth. (Because it has no name yet)

    Hey its Zeus here to review for the Big Bang! First off, this is a good story, and I'm already hooked on the series. Just asking, since this is science ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The New Generation--Chapter Two: Making Friends

    Hi its Zeus here to review for the Big Bang! First off, this is a great story, and I'm glad that there is-finally-another PJ fanfiction here for me to get ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2

    Hey @ParanormalMyth, you have already reviewed two of my works, so I thought that it was time that I reviewed some of yours. I read both chapters of your new ...

    Sep 27, 2015


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