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awwwwww that is so cute!! it reminds me of that story you told me about flora. lol i loved it.

thats one awesome first sentence, rieda. Nothing personal, I just have to force myself to read fantasy, and im to lazy to do that today, lol.

im lucy, who are you?

lol, yes i agree with all the critiques i could be bothered reading (which was the first one). Its really funny. hehehehe

its not just in this though. everything i write people critisise the spelling even when i spell check and its cos of the u's. i know this has spelling mistakes ...

um, can i just say that it appears that people are really picky on my spelling and they think words like "colour" and "favourite" are spelt wrong. they arent. in ...

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oh ok lol

apart from it being insest, which is disgusting, it was really well written, excellent descriptions and it flowed too, in my opinion. :)

if you're writing in youre journal, you dont usually say: welcome to (where ever you live). thats all i have to say, cos its weird.

ohh come on! surely i can get more critiques that that!!!!

i always thought eighty year old women were nice because they were trying to go to heaven... well, guess im wrong AS USUAL

thanks :) im only writing this post to see my signature :) CLAPS FOR LUCY!

thanks :) im only writing this post to see my signature :) CLAPS FOR LUCY!

sorry if theyre reading this, but your peom is better that Harpz. Cute how you put the "the" in the title.