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Psst. You might want to put a trigger warning at the start of this piece ;)

Okay. You asked me to review this, so here I am. The first thing I want to say is this: Have you been through and read over this? There are ...

I feel like this riddle has too many possible answers, so it's not really challenging as much as it's a matter of guessing the right one. For instance, in the ...

I have to disagree with you on the "clutching my chest" remark. It IS possible to clutch your chest (actresses do it all the time) and it reads much smoother ...

"gonna" is a colloquialism. The use of it, not unlike that of "Wanna" is designed to set the tone of a piece. It's the same way someone might say "hey" ...

I wouldn't submit this to a competition if you've posted it online. You don't know they won't run it through a program (as my university does) to see if you've ...

This was cute, but there was one error that really stood out to me. "Okay" is two syllables, not one. Ahhh, I'm glad I got that off my chest. Happy ...

Generally, I like it. Though there isn't much here to dislike...

Thanks to the both of you. I really wanted to get some opinions on this piece since all my teacher said was "Excellent", but I blame the fact that she ...

Sorry about the tummy sentence. I've changed it now. I was just in a hurry to get the last bit done that I let my speech take over my writing. ...

They had videos in the 20s? Perhaps you should just check. Yes, they did. The things you learn doing History.

I was just reading through this to find quotes for my fake blurb when I came across something... I noticed her door was slightly ajar. Out of pure concern, I ...

Haha. Co-written dialogue at its zaniest. Well done you two.

Haha, I agree with the Harry Potter hype. But not on Ray Romano. ^^

Thanks guys. I really like the twist I have, and it seems rather surprising. When I first wrote this, I realised that there was nothing written about incest, and I ...