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Please just post it on YWS, it hurts my eyes when it opens with Open Office, thanks.

Think I should make it Parts 1 and 2?

THank you all. I shall re-do Chap 2, perhaps break it into Parts 1 and 2 then I shall begin to plot Chap 3 (And work on my review ratio ...

Need a Hero? Need a Review? I'm Hiro... Okay let's do this: The first two lines are cool but... Wind whips at my hair furiously,Creating a witch-like pose around my ...

Thanks for the review Hippie, can you guess who Carter is stereotyped after?

I've editted according to your reviews. Hopefully I didn't miss anything. The story itself is still a bit loose but it'll fall in. Thanks for the reviews.

Thank you for the reviews. Just need a bit more before I can edit and start Chap 1, I'll keep you posted. Thanks

Thanks loads Dems, yes I will edit as much as I can. I really only did this part to try a different approach to my previous one. See from different ...

Edited now, Please review.

This... series... is... Awesome! Seriously. Favourite Character?

Thank you Master Yoda for my first review. I see what you mean about the Hi I'm Eric thing. Also I intended to explain the reason in the next chapter ...