This was my first attempt at travel writing. It took me around 15-20 mins to complete once i had the base. Im hoping to become a writer somday. And this is homework for my engli0sh language AS. 
So could you please review this? Thank you 
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Oh, OK.
silly me; I thought it's high school home work
Thanks.
Im in college at the moment. In the uk, so I dont have grades.
Im in the first year doing AS levels.
Im 17 (:
Good job, In which grade are you ?
Please just post it on YWS, it hurts my eyes when it opens with Open Office, thanks.