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Okay, maybe I made a mistake there but still. Who is Okami?

Nice. I may no have completely got everything but I'm not a poet. So stuff me. I'd just tidy up and maybe break up the paragraph.

Midnight, this story is from 2009. My latest Janitors, I think I'll change this name, is the one in the middle of the forum with 0 comments and 1 like.

So true. A friend of mine needs to know that.

Nice. I couldn't find anything except you said 'No' in the second to last paragraph instead of not. Otherwise, well done.

Awfully long eh? Took me a long time to write it too. :thud:

TheNewHero here to review! Chapter 1, by the way. Alright, I really liked Izumi's reviewing style, so I'll fuse our two. And Master_Yoda's. :) He's my mentor. This is what ...

Goddes of the sky, much better!

Your new heh? Welcome to YWS! Firstly this should be in Short Stories but it doesn't matter. This was really good. I can't find anything wrong, anywhere. Darn. No review. ...

Are this and Papillion 1 tied? Because I much prefer this. Please PM me with your latest Papillions. You've got me hooked.

Thanks tons guys! Yay, the title works! Actually I'm going with the idea of just Jack's beginning but every character mentioned plays a huge role. I'm going to edit this ...

Thanks guys! I'll rewrite and repost. Well, edit actually.

Haha, true. She actually said that unfortunately, the Erasers didn't turn out as good as they did. And they were, the only successes.

Oops. Sorry. Stupid Mistake. Never mind. Ignore.

Just realized something. Scrap the picture. That kid's not an animal. :)