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This was awesome and it should've been featured... if only you edit it first. Alright, in a recent review I told someone that rhythm was an important aspect in free ...

Hm... differing from the crowd here. I'm sorry g, but I don't think that was well presented. Firstly, until I read the reviews, I wasn't too sure if it was ...

Heya, TheNewHero here to review... I really am not sure that you portatryed this poem well. Asp.Author, can you write a sentence or two about exactly what this poem is ...

Tell your eight year old daughter that she could write her own Calvin & Hobbes. I think the best thing to do is to keep her stories short though, preserve ...

Heya, I'm TheNewHero! How about I review your poem today? My general impression of this poem was that it was bland. Basically you were just asking questions. I couldn't figure ...

I disagree, Nem. If there was some kind of field obstructing all the scanning stuff... Smex, I'm not hooked. You need to up this... up. :arrow: Firstly, your title Your ...

TheNewHero here for a quick review. Okay, first of all let me say I love Percy Jackson and by the way there's anew series coming out: The Heroes of Olympus ...

Hi there, thanks for the great piece. I really liked your style of writing. Your piece is so light-hearted... it's been a long since I've read something like this, a ...

This story has potential, but you're still missing it. Don't be afraid of breaking 'realism'. A few points you need to address, :arrow: Katarrina needs a shorter name :arrow: Katarrina ...

Much better, but I'm still unconvinced (Meh, I'm tough) I think your main problem was telling and not showing. Often you explained that you felt sorry, or were unconvinced etc. ...

Hero here to R(elay) and E(xplain) my VIEW of this. Okay, firstly let me say I really dislike historical war stories - especially those of more modern days. But whatever ...

Okay, I've skimmed and read the story and unfortunately, I don't think you've given this much. If this is humorous, then let it be humorous in full. It's not very ...

Okay, I'm here-ish. I can't give you a full scale review, sadly. Here's what I can say Firstly, just a bit of fact confusion. They are going to drive to ...

Heyo! Aloud should be allowed. Besides that, no nit-picks. I think though you should change all the "it"'s to My tears because I found myself wondering what "It"? Also, this ...

*grumble, grunmble* Hey Kay, this was really amazing and as soon as the *LIKE* button comes back, I shall click it. I've never written anything with imagery like this. If ...