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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: A brief history of boys I fancied as a teenager

    Chanson, you simply made my day. This was hilarious. I love how you were completely open and honest with all of us. That's what made it so good! And I ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Rise of the Flames (prologue)

    Hello there, Ignatius. That name sounds somewhat familiar. I will start out by saying, I think this could be a REALLY good book. Really, really, really good. And I'm being ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Goodbye

    Konnichiwa, Silver! (I do not speak Japanese, but I guessed at spelling that...) I don't know a lot about poetry. Just that this was really good! Beautiful, really. Very short. ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: 1.1 | The Girl in the White Box

    Hey Stevie! Okay, I must say--this was actually really good, and I don't say that often. My instinct is telling me this is going to be good book! The only ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Alchemists

    Bonjour SerenityCross! Lollipopper here to investigate. I saw a few grammatical errors but Justtrying picked most of them up. I actually really liked this. Like, really, honestly and truthfully. Pleas

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Princess and the Stones Prologue

    Hello, Floral Tiara. Here to review. Okay...let's see. I generally like this! It gives me the Lord of the Rings feeling and I like the world you're creating. But, A) ...

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Superhero Chronicles. Chapter 1

    Hey Destiny! Generally I like this. I think it's a strong idea that could branch off into different ways. But just a few thoughts. Okay, first, with your writing...I think ...

    Jun 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Hunting Dog - Chapter 1

    Hey Payne, thanks for the story. To tell you the truth, there's not much to pick out with this. It was pretty good! I like the story you're creating, but ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Ice Ambassadors: Chapter 1 (Edits!)

    Silentpages...I have to say...I'm jealous! This piece was friggin amazing. When I saw the outline I was like, "Politics and Pirates? That's too randomly stupid." Okay. I feel really bad ...

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Extraordinary: Chapter 1

    Hey! Lollipopper here to review. This piece was very short, might I say. I mean, seems like a prologue or something, so that's fine, but the point is there isn't ...

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Gap: Chapter One

    Hey SuperSquirrel, here to review. Basically, I think your story has a captivating feel to it and I encourage you to do more. I like the exciting post-Apocalyptic feel to ...

    Jun 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sacrificing Rememberance - Ch1

    Hey, Lollipopper here to investigate. Okay, generally, I liked this piece! Well paced with good information and detail. But I think there are a few issues here. Gah, I don't ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Break That Fall {Chapter1}*edited*

    Hey senorita! Lollipopper here to investigate. Overall, I love the idea of this story. I am NOT a romance person and this even caught MY eye. Doesn't happen much. But...I ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Prologue

    Hey firevirthral, I am really liking your avvie! Is it a phoenix? I love phoenixes. Okay, I actually really liked this. It gave just enough information to leave the reader ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Redemption [Chapter 1]

    Hey, DarkRain. You know, that's a pretty epic name. Overall, this piece was interesting and I think the idea is very gripping. I would be interested in reading this if ...

    May 7, 2011


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