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A pain in your soul, You seem invisible. A big gaping hole, And it takes its toll. People don’t realize, How bad it hurts. Your courage dies, No matter what ...

I'm finally here! I'm so sorry I didn't come earlier, I usually ignore messages... please don't eat me! Comments/Suggestions in red. 1. COMMENTS AND SUGESSTIONS ok no complaining for where ...

First, I must say: That was an amazing title! I love it. After re-reading a couple times, I finally got it! I really don't have much of a critique, I ...

First, please capitalize your I's, even if it's just in a message on the top of the real post (pet peeve of mine). Second, this isn't really a poem. It's ...

The title might be a little too strong, but alas. :P ....... MY POETRY IS SHIT! Some say that my poetry, lacks consistency - but I don't share this view. ...

After reading this poem, the only thing I can ask is "So what?" So far, it only tells the *what* of hypocrites, rather than the *why* which is so much ...

Cool, a new member! Before I review, I just wanted to mention the 2:1 ratio. For every 2 reviews, you can post 1 piece of yours. That way things work ...

To tell you the truth, I'm pretty unbiased to this. I rarely pay attention to war and all that... it's why I don't really like watching the news. It gets ...

swines: swine's glutens: gluttons There is an interesting thought here. A bit underdeveloped and uneven. You have chosen a setting for this poem, but it doesn't seem to have truly ...

*squeals* Yay! Another chapter to Clover's story. Thanks for telling me. As you can see, I enjoyed this one as well. But, there are a few things I suggest you ...

Aww man... finally someone to speak to about the books. I'm not gonna read all the previous posts, so forgive me if I repeat something. OVERALL I didn't mind it. ...

Beep, Regret swamps every thought, Should have told him, Should have been there, Should have stopped it. Beep, Too late for apology, All attempts fall on empty ears, Or dry ...

I loved this. I was in the crowd of "a penny?" but, having finished it, I am in awe. Very, very nice. My only critique is not actually of the ...

If I call will you arrive? If I yell your name will you yell back? Horrible first four lines! I suggest scratching those and starting all over. If the world ...

I no what you think Its gonna be another boring poem About how somebody has unspoken able beauty Or just to short of a skirt But this is about your ...