LittleLionWomen

I love it! it's one of those poems that's so easy to read! great fluency! I really like this segment the most- "I wish I had the courage To do ...

I really like this poem it's very powerful emotionally wise, you could work on your mechanics though. just the simple things is all you need. But, I read poetry for ...

This is a really funny poem, i'm not sure if you meant it that way but it's funny. " Chunky guys flying" - I literary laughed out loud. " One ...

I really like your poem! You've got some mad painting picture skills! I bet if you just tried to be a bit more original then you could make it a ...

really good. I loved it! great job! Also, don't apologise for bad grammar, everyone had bad grammar it's like apologising for breathing. lol! just don't sweat what people think, this ...

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. That was like Pure Awesome. You really have a gift. Great Fluency, Word Choice, very cleaver. I loved every bit! The ending was especially spectacular! it was so dramatic ...

i really like your poem! it's so touching. The SMTWTFS is a bit unnecessary, i mean we kind of know the days of the week. . . you should brainstorm ...

I thought that this poem was really well written. One thing I don't like is the fact it's so mainstream; the whole life a journey, the destination doesn't matter it's ...

I LOVE this poem! it's so powerful and true, how some people never live life to the fullest! it's truly amazing. I love this line the most, "Heart and mind ...

Amazing. It gave me actual chills. My favourite part was the word choice, however fluency needs some work. One line that stuck out was "barely glanced at the man getting ...

HaHaHa! I loved it! My favourite segment thing is "Another week wasted... The keys are grinning, The computer is winning." I thought that was really funny and cleaver. I can ...

Wow. That was very sad. One thing I should say is the very first line, "He left that night his held high," Do you mean He left that night his ...

Awesome! Great Job! I love the enthusiasm you express through out the poem. Like the person before me said, I like the fluency of your poem, it seems to fit ...

That was so. . powerful. So much feeling, really well written. I'm not the best at grammar so I won't even attempt to grammar check. But it was amazing, and ...