LittleLionWomen

it is a bit morbid. But I won't angrily tell you to see a shrink or anything. Every one has some crazy feelings, and this is much healthier then keeping ...

This poem put me in a momentary trance. Either from the thought of where the clouds go, or the total understanding of the 'silly child's wish' To love without being ...

Wow. I absolutely love this poem. I can totally relate, being the little innocent kitten that was never thought of doing anything considered 'bad' in my little town. The one ...

-er I really hate flamers don't you? Just picking at people wounds, but honestly these lyrics are a bit to cliche for me. I do however get a vary emotional ...

wow that was really good. Awesome job at painting the picture! "Have you had to say goodbye? To your grandma before she dies." < That my friend gave me the ...

This was great. One of those 'wow' moments. You're very Shakespearian in the sense you cut lines off, but you don't pause; It's cool. Also, Great wording. Really amazing. You ...

The song is alright. It's pretty typical though; branching off and the butterfly metaphor. I mean it is great, and I probably couldn't come up with a song half as ...

Great job! you can really choose your words well! I mean Phantasm

Yay! First Review for this one! Yippie! Anyways. . . This was very cute. A bit cheesy love for a while, but I like it. I like the whole burying ...

HaHaHaHa I thought this poem was hilarious! I like the use of bad grammar, you still understand the poem, but it's not all proper. I like it. My life be ...

Great poem, I'm not a dancer, but i felt connected to it anyway. I think you might have used 'there's' a lot though. It just felt like it, especially at ...

So this is some pretty fine work right here. Perhaps not my cup of tea. I feel like your kind of bringing in those stupid jokes and stereotyping teenagers.

I think what would make your poem oh so much better would be a rhyming scheme. Because it feels like your going for the cute/funny poem that people can relate ...

I like the simplicity of this poem! it's cute and bubbly and just fun! it gives you a break of all the complicated, confusing, deep, dramatic, sad, depressing, cliche, and ...

I can really relate to this! I've been feeling all those simple happy days are gone, and now everything is either graded or judged. I guess you could say i ...