LittleLee

Thanks! :D

Hey, thanks! I've already made edits on most of the things you pointed out, actually. I didn't bother updating it here, but I've done it. Thanks for pointing it out, ...

Thanks a lot for your review! Trust me, I need all the criticism I can get. I'm actually trying to establish that the twins are somewhat cold-hearted; or rather, they ...

Thanks, Harry! You weren't too critical, don't worry. I actually appreciate everything you said, and I'll edit my novel accordingly. I'm glad you liked reading it!

Thanks for the review! I meant the moon. I also didn't want to describe any sounds because the world is "frozen", completely given up to the wild joy the fauns ...

Thank you so much for your appreciation, Winny! I'll make that change.

Thank you for the review! I'll work on my poem. I meant to say that their voices travel farther in the darkness than seems normal. The imagery is vague, but ...

Thank you for the review, Shade! I wanted to induce a feeling of wild happiness, something primal yet magical. The narrators are so intoxicated by their freedom that to them, ...

This is a great poem. I'll admit it emotionally destabilized me for a second because I remembered denying my sexuality for several years. I really can't put into words how ...

Oh, okay. You don't need an answer, I suppose. Either way, it's a lovely poem. I'm glad you found my review useful!

Thanks for the review, Myth! I really appreciate it.

It's a lot better!

Ahhhh I'm so sorry! I wasn't sure about that. Thank you for pointing it out; and Shade, I'm sorry again for saying something wrong!

Happy to help!

This was a short and simple poem. I'm not reviewing it because I can't find anything to say, but I really liked it!