LittleLee

Hey, Little here for a review! My last one, for today. Well, I really like the opening lines of your story... ESPECIALLY the prophecy thing in the very beginning. But, ...

Hey! Alright, I couldn't read the whole thing. It looks VERY monotonous, intimidating, and frankly saying, boring. The topic you took is rather interesting, though, I'll give you that. Look, ...

Hey there, LittleLee here for a review!!! So, starting off, the story is a nice read, but it could and should be improved. You misspelled "purposefully" as "purposely" there is ...

Hey there, LittleLee is here for a review! Starting off, I really rather like your story's plot. The only problem is that your punctuation is rather bad. I don't want ...

Hey there, LittleLee here for a review! First of all, I really like the way you have described how the narrator is a vigilante. Your writing is almost perfect, but ...

Hey, blue, here I come for a review! Oh. That even rhymes. Anyways. I just love the idea of an old lady going to fight evil - I mean, why ...

And here I am again to review your work! Well, the poem is very nice, and it has a powerful message that you have conveyed to the readers rather easily, ...

Hey, here I am for a review!!! Firstly, why is the narrator running? I mean, you should have elaborated that little bit. The first line should have been, "It all ...

Hey Feltrix, Lee's here for a review! So, starting off, I really, really like the first stanza, because it's all about the library and how huge it is. They way ...

Hey, LittLee is here for reviewing! Firstly, the first paragraph, while descriptive, has too many short sentences, so instead of fragmenting it so much, why don't you just join a ...

Hey there! Little's hee for a review! I'll start with the negatives so that I don't leave a sour taste in your mouth when I'm done and begin with the ...

Hey, LittleLee here for a review! Firstly, the poem is very nice. To refer to it as a cog in a machine is quite fascinating. I especially like the last ...

LittleLee here for a review! The poem is so sweet! You have a very unique perspective, and I'd love to see you work on it! I especially like the part ...

Hey, LittLer is here for a good review!! Starting off, the story is rather malevolent and gloomy. I love it! The things I didn't like were those listed below. The ...

Hey, LittleLee is here for a review! Alright, starting off, the poem is expressed very nicely, I like your use of words to captivate the reader's mind. I'll say that ...