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Hey there, Storm! Here comes Lee to review your story! I really liked it. But I'll begin by pointing out all the things I felt have scope for improvement. If ...

Hi, legolas! This story is short and sweet. I liked reading it, and the ending made me smile. It's a really sweet bond between Dee and her grandfather that you've ...

Hey, whatcha! I don't recall having reviewed your work before, so here I am! I'm going to save the positive feedback for the end, alright? Before I begin, I am ...

Hi rishitasidenur, I'm Lee! A belated welcome to the site. I'm here to review your story. It seems rather interesting. The descriptions are well done, the character seems fun to ...

Greetings, Storm! I've popped over to review your story! I'll tell you straight off that this story seems to have a lot of potential. I can see you have quite ...

Hi, Harry! I saw that you've been writing your own novel, so I decided to give it a try and shoot off reviews where I can. I'll begin by saying ...

Hi there, yellow! What a nice poem. It's really short, but still manages to convey the sadness and pain of the narrator. I also love the imagery: please haunt the ...

Hi, theescaper020, here I come to review your poem! This poem reminds me a lot of "Caged Bird", by Maya Angelou. Were you inspired in part by her? Otherwise, I ...

Here I am to drop off a review in the name of Team Tortoise! This poem is light and nice to read. I do like the slight sense of abstracted ...

Hi, Vaibhav, I'm here to review your work. Before I start my review, I apologise in advance if you find it too critical or offensive. I am just trying to ...

Hi, Shade, It's been a little time since you published this, but I've been keen to review this, so here I am! But in all honesty, I am now reading ...

Hi, Winny! Before I begin my review, I just want to say I'm not going to comment on the title, because i don't know who this poem is for. It's ...

Hello, Em, I thought I'd drop by for a quick review. I love the topic and how well you've portrayed this whole feeling of self-hatred. At first, I was wondering ...

Hi, GirlWithATypeWriter! Lee's here to review your poem. First off, I can see the powerful emotion in this poem. It's so simple yet hauntingly beautiful, at least to me. While ...

I'm back to review this chapter! So, well done, the story seems to be coming along nicely. I can see a lot of improvement! Let me just point out a ...