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Re: Dear Percilla
Hey dreamer, I'm Lee and here to review your poem! Wow. Just wow. For some reason, I was reminded of Robert Browning while reading this; maybe it's the dramatic monologue, ...
Aug 5, 2020 -
Re: Thought I'd try again
Here comes Lee to drop off a quick review! This piece is still in the Green Room, technically, so let's take it out. To begin with, I enjoyed the rhyme ...
Aug 4, 2020 -
Re: Long Sleeves
Here I am, writing reviews for pieces lost to the deep archives of YWS. It's just that I think this poem deserves one review done in the style followed now. ...
Aug 4, 2020 -
Re: Ad Astra
Hello, Shade, it's been a while! To begin with, I'd like to say that this poem has managed to convey the sense of wonder one has when looking at the ...
Aug 4, 2020 -
Re: Monster
Hi, Messenger! I'm Lee, and here to review this poem. To start off, the format was slightly confusing; I assumed it was a story you had put in the wrong ...
Aug 2, 2020 -
Re: Bridges
Hey there, I'm Lee and here to review your work! You may never see this, but I'll do it anyway. Your story is really nice; there aren't many glaring mistakes ...
Aug 1, 2020 -
Re: An Apology
Hey there Gravy, it's Lee! I haven't written a review in ages, so bear with me, haha. To begin with, this is, as Inconspicuous already mentioned, very clearly from the ...
Aug 1, 2020 -
Re: Writer
Hey there Jiggity, I'm Lee, and here to review your poem. I doubt you'll ever see this, but it's a very nice piece that deserves more attention than it's received! ...
Jul 23, 2020 -
Re: Chapter One - The Chopping Block
Hey cow, here i come for a review! My first impression: rather well-written, but quite informal. If you were aiming for a more comedic story, it's perfect, but if you're ...
Jul 19, 2020 -
Re: Last Words
Hello juans, I'm Lee, and here to review your short story! Wow. What a well-written, captivating piece. The description made me fly through the story, wondering why the narrator is ...
Jul 18, 2020 -
Re: A Silent Battlefield
Hey Storm, here I come to review your novel! To begin with, I'm impressed by how you wrote a really simple short story based on a picture that conveyed little. ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: Phantoms
Hi, Liminality, I'm Lee, and here to review your short story! I'll begin by saying it's very interesting and well-thought out, and I was overall impressed with your writing. There ...
Jul 13, 2020 -
Re: Weird hands.
Hello, mercurialbuddha, I'm Lee, and here today to review your short story! It's nice, and rather well written. Was this in any way inspired by Ruskin Bond's A Face in ...
Jul 6, 2020 -
Re: Steal my Kingdom - Prologue
Hey there queenoni, welcome to the site! You can call me LittleLee, lee, or Little. Or anything, for that matter. I'm here today to review your chapter. Your grammar is ...
Jul 5, 2020 -
Re: Rain
Let me be the first to review your poem! It's such a haunting, melancholy poem. The very image of rain... Ah. You've done a good job. Okay, but before I ...
Jul 2, 2020
