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LittleLee

Life before death. Strength before weakness. Journey before destination.

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dear Percilla

    Hey dreamer, I'm Lee and here to review your poem! Wow. Just wow. For some reason, I was reminded of Robert Browning while reading this; maybe it's the dramatic monologue, ...

    Aug 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Thought I'd try again

    Here comes Lee to drop off a quick review! This piece is still in the Green Room, technically, so let's take it out. To begin with, I enjoyed the rhyme ...

    Aug 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Long Sleeves

    Here I am, writing reviews for pieces lost to the deep archives of YWS. It's just that I think this poem deserves one review done in the style followed now. ...

    Aug 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Ad Astra

    Hello, Shade, it's been a while! To begin with, I'd like to say that this poem has managed to convey the sense of wonder one has when looking at the ...

    Aug 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Monster

    Hi, Messenger! I'm Lee, and here to review this poem. To start off, the format was slightly confusing; I assumed it was a story you had put in the wrong ...

    Aug 2, 2020
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Bridges

    Hey there, I'm Lee and here to review your work! You may never see this, but I'll do it anyway. Your story is really nice; there aren't many glaring mistakes ...

    Aug 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Apology

    Hey there Gravy, it's Lee! I haven't written a review in ages, so bear with me, haha. To begin with, this is, as Inconspicuous already mentioned, very clearly from the ...

    Aug 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Writer

    Hey there Jiggity, I'm Lee, and here to review your poem. I doubt you'll ever see this, but it's a very nice piece that deserves more attention than it's received! ...

    Jul 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter One - The Chopping Block

    Hey cow, here i come for a review! My first impression: rather well-written, but quite informal. If you were aiming for a more comedic story, it's perfect, but if you're ...

    Jul 19, 2020
  • Art » Narrative, Literature Re: Last Words

    Hello juans, I'm Lee, and here to review your short story! Wow. What a well-written, captivating piece. The description made me fly through the story, wondering why the narrator is ...

    Jul 18, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: A Silent Battlefield

    Hey Storm, here I come to review your novel! To begin with, I'm impressed by how you wrote a really simple short story based on a picture that conveyed little. ...

    Jul 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Phantoms

    Hi, Liminality, I'm Lee, and here to review your short story! I'll begin by saying it's very interesting and well-thought out, and I was overall impressed with your writing. There ...

    Jul 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Weird hands.

    Hello, mercurialbuddha, I'm Lee, and here today to review your short story! It's nice, and rather well written. Was this in any way inspired by Ruskin Bond's A Face in ...

    Jul 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Steal my Kingdom - Prologue

    Hey there queenoni, welcome to the site! You can call me LittleLee, lee, or Little. Or anything, for that matter. I'm here today to review your chapter. Your grammar is ...

    Jul 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rain

    Let me be the first to review your poem! It's such a haunting, melancholy poem. The very image of rain... Ah. You've done a good job. Okay, but before I ...

    Jul 2, 2020


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