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Re: The Thunder
Hi Liminality! Lee here for a quick review! I'm honestly kinda lost for words. My very first impression, right after the FIRST paragraph was just a "wow." The opening lines ...
Jun 15, 2022 -
Re: Afterlife chapter 5
Greetings again, Col3! I'm back to drop off another quick review! So, getting right into it; this was a good, solid chapter than managed to transition from the mortal (?) ...
Jun 14, 2022 -
Re: Afterlife chapter 4
Hey Col3! Damn. This chapter certainly takes things up a notch. Overall I like this chapter, I think it's been written quite well; the twist at the end is also ...
Jun 13, 2022 -
Re: Afterlife Chapter 3
Hi Col3, I'm here again for a review! Wow, okay, this chapter is... graphic. I was expecting that, but it might need a content warning xD Anyway, you did a ...
Jun 12, 2022 -
Re: Afterlife Chapter 2
Hello again, Cole! Lee's here for a quick review! First off, I like how this chapter is easing things up a little. The last one ended quite strongly, which definitely ...
Jun 11, 2022 -
Re: Afterlife
Hey there Col3! I hope you're having a good day! Damn, this is a rather strong chapter. It's pretty well written, and definitely manages to hook the reader. It's good ...
Jun 9, 2022 -
Re: One and the Same
Hello, VioletFantasy! I hope you're having a good day! This poem is short and sweet, just how I like it. As others have observed, this poem reminds one of the ...
Jun 9, 2022 -
Re: Our journey to happiness (chapter 1)
Hey Bita, I hope you're having a good day! Alright, this story is quite the rollercoaster. I don't mind the swearing or slightly more triggering scenes, but you should probably ...
Jun 8, 2022 -
Re: The Great God of Writing
Hi Horisun! I'm here to drop off a quick review! :) This poem made me laugh. I too would love to have a writing god I can worship who keeps ...
Jun 7, 2022 -
Re: an admission of sorts
Heya mothbroth, Lee's here for a quick review! This poem's strong point is its harsh imagery; bringing up iron, salt, the merciless sea, and a gaping void was a good ...
Jun 6, 2022 -
Re: Picking through the Rubble-Part 1
Hello, Beast! Lee's here for a quick review! Straight off the bat, I have to compliment you on how engaging this chapter was. The beginning was a little slow, but ...
Jun 4, 2022 -
Re: Chapter 1: You don’t get to see the title
Hey Hannah, Lee here for a short review! Straight off, I love the format of this poem; it's very aesthetic and doesn't feel forced. Good on you! I also like ...
Jun 4, 2022 -
Re: The Last Day of Autumn
Hello again Rebel! I know this is a slightly older piece, but I was checking out some of your work and this caught my eye! Your use of enjambments is ...
Jun 2, 2022 -
Re: An Ode to Liberty
Hey, TheRebel2007! I hope you're having a great day/night! It's been a really long time since I last wrote a review, and this poem was a great start towards breaking ...
Jun 1, 2022 -
Re: Gwendolen
Hey there, Lunar, I hope you're having a good day! First off, I really enjoy reading retellings of existing stories, and this is no exception. It's nice to see the ...
Mar 1, 2022