Young Writers Society

Hi Liminality! Lee here for a quick review! I'm honestly kinda lost for words. My very first impression, right after the FIRST paragraph was just a "wow." The opening lines ...

Greetings again, Col3! I'm back to drop off another quick review! So, getting right into it; this was a good, solid chapter than managed to transition from the mortal (?) ...

Hey Col3! Damn. This chapter certainly takes things up a notch. Overall I like this chapter, I think it's been written quite well; the twist at the end is also ...

Hi Col3, I'm here again for a review! Wow, okay, this chapter is... graphic. I was expecting that, but it might need a content warning xD Anyway, you did a ...

Hello again, Cole! Lee's here for a quick review! First off, I like how this chapter is easing things up a little. The last one ended quite strongly, which definitely ...

Hey there Col3! I hope you're having a good day! Damn, this is a rather strong chapter. It's pretty well written, and definitely manages to hook the reader. It's good ...

Hello, VioletFantasy! I hope you're having a good day! This poem is short and sweet, just how I like it. As others have observed, this poem reminds one of the ...

Hey Bita, I hope you're having a good day! Alright, this story is quite the rollercoaster. I don't mind the swearing or slightly more triggering scenes, but you should probably ...

Hi Horisun! I'm here to drop off a quick review! :) This poem made me laugh. I too would love to have a writing god I can worship who keeps ...

Heya mothbroth, Lee's here for a quick review! This poem's strong point is its harsh imagery; bringing up iron, salt, the merciless sea, and a gaping void was a good ...

Hello, Beast! Lee's here for a quick review! Straight off the bat, I have to compliment you on how engaging this chapter was. The beginning was a little slow, but ...

Hey Hannah, Lee here for a short review! Straight off, I love the format of this poem; it's very aesthetic and doesn't feel forced. Good on you! I also like ...

Hello again Rebel! I know this is a slightly older piece, but I was checking out some of your work and this caught my eye! Your use of enjambments is ...

Hey, TheRebel2007! I hope you're having a great day/night! It's been a really long time since I last wrote a review, and this poem was a great start towards breaking ...

Hey there, Lunar, I hope you're having a good day! First off, I really enjoy reading retellings of existing stories, and this is no exception. It's nice to see the ...