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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology
    Re: The Thunder

    Hi Liminality! Lee here for a quick review! I'm honestly kinda lost for words. My very first impression, right after the FIRST paragraph was just a "wow." The opening lines ...

    Jun 15, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Re: Afterlife chapter 5

    Greetings again, Col3! I'm back to drop off another quick review! So, getting right into it; this was a good, solid chapter than managed to transition from the mortal (?) ...

    Jun 14, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Re: Afterlife chapter 4

    Hey Col3! Damn. This chapter certainly takes things up a notch. Overall I like this chapter, I think it's been written quite well; the twist at the end is also ...

    Jun 13, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Re: Afterlife Chapter 3

    Hi Col3, I'm here again for a review! Wow, okay, this chapter is... graphic. I was expecting that, but it might need a content warning xD Anyway, you did a ...

    Jun 12, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Re: Afterlife Chapter 2

    Hello again, Cole! Lee's here for a quick review! First off, I like how this chapter is easing things up a little. The last one ended quite strongly, which definitely ...

    Jun 11, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Supernatural
    Re: Afterlife

    Hey there Col3! I hope you're having a good day! Damn, this is a rather strong chapter. It's pretty well written, and definitely manages to hook the reader. It's good ...

    Jun 9, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: One and the Same

    Hello, VioletFantasy! I hope you're having a good day! This poem is short and sweet, just how I like it. As others have observed, this poem reminds one of the ...

    Jun 9, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General
    Re: Our journey to happiness (chapter 1)

    Hey Bita, I hope you're having a good day! Alright, this story is quite the rollercoaster. I don't mind the swearing or slightly more triggering scenes, but you should probably ...

    Jun 8, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, Humor
    Re: The Great God of Writing

    Hi Horisun! I'm here to drop off a quick review! :) This poem made me laugh. I too would love to have a writing god I can worship who keeps ...

    Jun 7, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: an admission of sorts

    Heya mothbroth, Lee's here for a quick review! This poem's strong point is its harsh imagery; bringing up iron, salt, the merciless sea, and a gaping void was a good ...

    Jun 6, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Horror
    Re: Picking through the Rubble-Part 1

    Hello, Beast! Lee's here for a quick review! Straight off the bat, I have to compliment you on how engaging this chapter was. The beginning was a little slow, but ...

    Jun 4, 2022


  • Hey Hannah, Lee here for a short review! Straight off, I love the format of this poem; it's very aesthetic and doesn't feel forced. Good on you! I also like ...

    Jun 3, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: The Last Day of Autumn

    Hello again Rebel! I know this is a slightly older piece, but I was checking out some of your work and this caught my eye! Your use of enjambments is ...

    Jun 2, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: An Ode to Liberty

    Hey, TheRebel2007! I hope you're having a great day/night! It's been a really long time since I last wrote a review, and this poem was a great start towards breaking ...

    Jun 1, 2022

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic
    Re: Gwendolen

    Hey there, Lunar, I hope you're having a good day! First off, I really enjoy reading retellings of existing stories, and this is no exception. It's nice to see the ...

    Mar 1, 2022


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