LittleFox

Hello There! This has some good stuff in it. Good choice of a meaningful topic and good tone. However, I would suggest adding concrete images. Only saying thoughts and feelings ...

Third review in a row I'm on fire woot woot! Alright so first thing is the change of point of view. It feels kind of odd for the pov to ...

Ay I'm back for another review today since I've got some free time! So here's my nit pick as usual; I feel like Cent's reaction to how Maggie is acting ...

After a long wait I am finally here haha so lets's not delay this any longer and get right to the review. So my first nitpick is this; There is ...

Ok, I'm super tired so this review may take awhile for me to write xD Anyway, here I am finally! Time to get review'n. Something I like about your writing ...

Hello there, LittleFox here to review :) First things first I really like this idea of a little, and remarkably intellectual girl writing poetry in her diary. I do think ...

Yay! After reviewing the first part of this, I was super excited to see that this part was up! I'm defiantly very much in love with this story. Anyway let's ...

Good Morning! After much delay am finally here to read and review DUET, and I am rather excited. So, let's get started! As always I won't be reading the other ...

Hi there! I'm back after a rather long hiatus from reading and reviewing! I really love your description of action in the beginning and also the pacing and sense tension ...

Hi there, Littlefox here to review your poem :) I'm not an expert at poetry, but I really love anything about Greek mythology, so I will try to give what ...

Hello there! LittleFox here to review! Wow, I really liked this from the very beginning to the end. This seems to be the start of a very unique story and ...

Hi, me again :) This chapter was really good, as always. I just have one nit-pick; "He was thankful he had thought to change out of his long robes...sharp lines." ...

Hello there. It's been awhile since I've reviewed one of these chapters since I've been stressing over final exams, but now I'm back! On to the review. This chapter was ...

This was amazing! This chapter and the whole story itself! I'm not even sure what else I can say. I would have like this to have been a little longer. ...

Hello, happy review day! So, it's exciting being this close to the end! It's really interesting to find out exactly what Eugene did to cause all this stuff. And I ...