LittleCaroleen

I think that would flow better. I see the rhyme more now, but it's hard to find at the beginning. (I agree on poetry helping people. I have no idea ...

Thank you so much for your review. :) I'm glad you liked it, because I wasn't sure about it.

It took me back a little bit, but I needed an honest opinion on it. :) If you could go review some of my other works, I'd really appreciate it.

Thank you. I'll try my best to make it better. :)

Yeah I wasn't sure about it. I know it needs a lot of tweaking. That's why I put it on here. I like the idea behind it. And I like ...

Wow! For your first time it's extremely well put together! I'm glad I could help you on it.

Some of the same words* my goodness I don't know how that happened. thesaurus* Maybe I need to proofread my reviews more carefully. Haha.

The reason why the questions remain unanswered is because these questions are the ones that are almost impossible to answer. These are the questions that I don't know the answers ...

Haha. Thank you. :) It actually isn't what I was trying to show at all. It's just posing questions as to what one might do in any of these awkward ...

The last part was a typo. I really need to double check my stuff. -_- And the first one refers to a personal experience. I don't know if other people ...

Really great short story. It keeps it simple and to the point. The "about me and my failures" part and how you're edi--- Oh wait. That's not right. This is ...

Ahh okay. Yeah I did keep it consistent. Thank you for your review. :)

A very interesting story. Extremely original and a little sad. I love the delicacy in your structure choices. It's both true and heartbreaking.

Thank you! I know it's hard to tell what's going on. The general idea is about wanting a person, but you're scared. Like saying "I just want the truth/Without all ...

People keep telling me the tense changes. I don't see it, and I know that sounds odd, but I keep looking over and over again trying to see what's going ...