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LittleBird8060

  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Heart Surgery

    Hello! I'll start with the review first and write what I liked about it on the bottom Open up to my heart like a morning glory opens up to the ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: False Mourners, Please Step Forward

    Hello! This is my first poem review! I honestly have no idea to poem review, so sorry if my review seems useless. We stand here today to celebrate the life ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 4

    So many chapters! I'll have a lot to review. You prob memorized this but here again anyways: Key: My comments will be in red My suggestions to add something will ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: Tekky tries to help an anemic.

    Hello! Your story is funny lol XD. This is just a little review to fix any punctuation/grammar errors I find. Key: My comments will be in red My suggestions to ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Oath

    Well, your story certainly seemed... dark. I would like to try reviewing it anyways! I hope that it helps, and if it doesn't, sorry for wasting your time. I'm just ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 3

    Hi! You post stories way faster than I can review them.... How do you even think of ideas that fast? I'm still stuck on chap 2 for my story rip. ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 2

    Ok I was going to sleep (it's like 1 AM here) but I'm not sleepy (I screwed up my sleep schedule) so I guess I will write review here Key: ...

    Jul 31, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 1

    Hello! I'm just an amateur reviewer, but I still want to practice and get better. I hope my suggestions down in the spoiler helps, and if it doesn't sorry for ...

    Jul 31, 2017
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Spooksville Summary Number Two!

    This is my first review, so sorry if it seems bad! I just made some corrections in the spoiler below. Hopefully it helped, and if it didn't, sorry for wasting ...

    Jul 31, 2017


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