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Re: Heart Surgery
Hello! I'll start with the review first and write what I liked about it on the bottom Open up to my heart like a morning glory opens up to the ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: False Mourners, Please Step Forward
Hello! This is my first poem review! I honestly have no idea to poem review, so sorry if my review seems useless. We stand here today to celebrate the life ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 4
So many chapters! I'll have a lot to review. You prob memorized this but here again anyways: Key: My comments will be in red My suggestions to add something will ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Tekky tries to help an anemic.
Hello! Your story is funny lol XD. This is just a little review to fix any punctuation/grammar errors I find. Key: My comments will be in red My suggestions to ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Oath
Well, your story certainly seemed... dark. I would like to try reviewing it anyways! I hope that it helps, and if it doesn't, sorry for wasting your time. I'm just ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 3
Hi! You post stories way faster than I can review them.... How do you even think of ideas that fast? I'm still stuck on chap 2 for my story rip. ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 2
Ok I was going to sleep (it's like 1 AM here) but I'm not sleepy (I screwed up my sleep schedule) so I guess I will write review here Key: ...
Jul 31, 2017 -
Re: Heir of the Moonlight chapter 1
Hello! I'm just an amateur reviewer, but I still want to practice and get better. I hope my suggestions down in the spoiler helps, and if it doesn't sorry for ...
Jul 31, 2017 -
Re: Spooksville Summary Number Two!
This is my first review, so sorry if it seems bad! I just made some corrections in the spoiler below. Hopefully it helped, and if it didn't, sorry for wasting ...
Jul 31, 2017
