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LisaMCooper

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance [Excerpt]

    Haha! I thought I had it rated 16 with a fantasy tag. Oh well! Just more editing work! :D

    Jun 27, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance [Excerpt]

    Nah nah, you're fine. I stink at reviews myself. XD And I did rate it, though I guess it didn't show up. And good point, I guess I do kind ...

    Jun 27, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance [Excerpt]

    Thank you! And yes, he is. :p And now, off to take it off my website and add to it! And thank you again for your review! :D

    Jun 27, 2012
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Five Months

    Sorry. But they're paying me to post, so it isn't a matter of just joining a new site. It's a matter of getting paid to post and I kinda need ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Five Months

    Wow! i always give the lyrics forum a pass, but this piece got me reading to the end, you could actually go platinum with this, good work. If this was ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Five Months

    This is so pretty! I actually felt really sad reading it :( If you're speaking from personal experience I hope that you're feeling better now. Albert Camus once said, "Blessed ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Five Months

    Well, this wasn't rubbish it was pretty good actually. Lyrics change depending how you sing them. I sang them slowly and they didn't sound that bad. Pretty good. (The lyrics, ...

    Jul 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Poisoned Apples Are So Snow White!

    I have a complicated love affair with fairytales, so when I saw the title, you might as well have held up a sign that said, "CALLING ALL OCTAVES." xD Anyway, ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: You Don't Love Me

    I liked this a lot. Was it purely fictional? Or was this something you went through? Either way, I like your realistic perspective on writing this. I think you could ...

    Mar 24, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Crystal Heart [Story is done, critiques needed]

    HEY! So, I had to review this, because, you see, the topic ID is my zip code (crap, I shouldn't have let that slip...) So, honestly, I really liked this... ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Locket

    i hope to collect lockets. But about the poem or whatever you call it. Amazing i like the soul of it. Did that happen to you not to be a ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Attention

    Hello I'm LastPaladin and I shall reviewing this piece. My opinion from what I could stand to read was this was Angst, not even constructive, or well written just a ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Attention

    This was a beutiful poem to read! I actually sang it over and over again, placing a slow, almost mournful tune to it. Did you ever consider making it a ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Attention

    Loved it! I especially loved the end of the second to last stanza, it makes it so much sadder. I do think the rest of it is terribly much like ...

    Nov 23, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Attention

    Attention I’m trying to keep a hold of my emotions, I think you should leave out the "a hold" and just say, your trying to hold on to your emotions ...

    Nov 23, 2010


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— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind