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HaHa. Funny :D Normally, the first was an annoyance and the second didn’t matter. This sentence did not make sense to me in the spot it was. What is she ...

You finished it! *runs and hugs you* This was an amazing ending, and now I'm so freaked out that I don't think I'll be able to sleep tonight. Oh man, ...

*claps* Hi and welcome to YWS! This was a good piece for your first one to post. I loved it. One thing confused me throughout the whole poem, was that ...

This was pretty short, so it was kind of hard to critique. But, nevertheless... The mother screamed, and her husband's progenitors scowled down at her from their gilded frames. The ...

Wow. The meaning was powerful. I love the way you made the ocean a part of it. I see her sitting there Upon that rock every day I keep wondering ...

Woah. No grammar mistakes that I saw. Awesome Reuben. I saw a typo or two, but everyone has those. Just make sure to still go over your work before you ...

Very well written, I congratulate you. Truly. We are getting to the good parts of the story. Grammar-wise, uh...you had numerous mistakes. Some things were not capitalized again, so you ...

Zomg!! :shock: No one has reviewed this for the past month. Wow. Well, that's why I am here. On the ship comma here Rachel could see there was a great ...

HaHa. That was the funniest thing I have seen all day. :D Bella's going to fall in love with Nate? *starts cracking up* Woho! *A heavenly dude descends from up ...

My review: What the freak?? :shock: How the crap did she know Nathaniel was Mr. Peyton's son??? Ok, what I would say for this post, is to go back over ...

Aw..... I believe you have the lowest self-esteem that I have ever seen. This was great! We had already spent two hours being pampered by the spa staff. Face masks, ...

This was great! Especially since you forgot about it in your deep computer files. Those glory days of my younger years seemed a distant dream. Having this mistake at the ...

Welcome to YWS! This was good. The meaning of this poem I understand perfectly. Good job. In the second stanza, stars and hours do not rhyme. In all of the ...

Did you know what the title made me think of? "The devil went down to Georgia." But that's off-topic. Back on topic. It was first try experience. I thought it ...

You ask me to review this, for you fear that it needs help. I look at this, and I have to search deep into it to find any mistakes. :D ...