LindsayG

Wow, first of all that is a very powerful opening! When Alexander the Great saw the breadth of his domain, he wept, for there were no more worlds to conquer ...

Hey! Here to review! First of all, I loved this poem, it definitely stirred some emotions in me. My favorite part was probably, how we suffered, how we are delighted, ...

Hey! So I will just jump straight into the review. The flaming sun above is so bright; It is such a beautiful morning, And yet, I can't see any light. ...

interesting!!!!! It's supposed to be sad, but i found myself smiling at this...maybe because it was really short.... but great description and good job!

Woah! I really loved this. Great job!!!!!! My favorite part was, "The panic, it comes from the fright like a child without a nightlight" But a quick nip tick though, ...

Wow! It is very hard to keep me interested in novels late;y because most of the time, halfway through reading it gets overtly predictable. But this was wonderfully done! Great ...

I feel like you can develop more points and make this a very entertaining piece. You definitely have the basis but at the same time, it needs work. Try rewriting ...

When i started reading this i didn't really know what to expect but as i read on i did start to have a few guesses (as usual). But what i ...

Very good! But try formatting it better to make it easier to read. Using the "slash sign" doesn't actually do it effectively. Another nip tick, a comma should come after ...

I visualize hes hand on your behind, So am i still suppose to think that your mine? I've put hours on end to see your smile, But you've messed up ...

Hey Freakette!!!! Here to review again.....and all I can say is whoah!!!!!! Once again, I was completely blown away....You a an amazing writer. I connected with the characters, the dialogue ...

Hey ZLYF, Here to review your work today.... Don't know much about tearing it apart, but I'll do my best... Firstly, I liked how you started this chapter, it gives ...

Hello Herebemonsters....will be reviewing your work today. Okay, so first of I liked the story line and I feel you wrote it...told it so beautiful. You used exquisite language to ...

After the feast Axile showed Jay to his room, while Conie showed me to my own. Conie talked me through where everything was - which went in one hear and ...

"We're done for today, keep up your studies, stay away from bar wenches, and well, don't get poisoned and die" He said has he raised a hand in farewell. Dresden ...