Abuse
Your fear,
followed by your tears,
and caused by pain
Your doubt,
that you'll ever get out,
gets stronger everyday
Your nightmare,
full of horror and terror,
is now your reality
You want to be fearless,
you want to be brave,
you want to get out,
but that,
you doubt
Trembling,
in hopeless despair,
that uneasy feeling,
everywhere
The panic,
it comes from the fright
like a child without a nightlight
The trepidation,
that today will be your last day,
might never go away
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Woah! I really loved this. Great job!!!!!!
My favorite part was,
"The panic,
it comes from the fright
like a child without a nightlight"
But a quick nip tick though, i felt the ending was perhaps too abrupt, any more ideas? it could go on longer but this works pretty well too.
Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very good poem, I hope you don't get abused
. I love how each section describes what the topic is. ( Not sure if I make sense, lol.) This is one of my favorite poems yet that I've read. This is a very sad poem though, I felt so sorry for the "character?" who's feeling this.