Lindsaroo

I...have no idea what to say. But in a good way. This was really good. I'm going out and saying that I loved it. The imagery was excellent. And it ...

I actually liked this. It's just my opinion but I found it a nice thing to read. It had good imagery even though it kind of fell out at one ...

haha This was really cute. It was a nice little song and I could almost imagine a melody to it. It was a bit....what's a word for it...odd? But I ...

I really like this stuff you come up with. I still think you'd make a great song writer. That's what most of you stuff reminds me of. It's really good ...

Oh this is really nice, Max. I do agree that this could make a really nice song if you wanted to try it out. But it's still good as is. ...

Okay! I must ask... how exactly did this poem kill a spider? XD Um...I flipped my notebook over kinda hard on the desk to write on the next page. And ...

*giggles* You actually posted this? Teehee. Silly Aet. ^_^ But really, I Lurve it! ( And I seriously giggled :O ) Lots O' Luv, Lindsay

Dude...what the heck is up with Ally and Josh? Hmm...Anyways, Very good Tina, can't wait for the next one! Again, I saw nothing wrong with it, and Muffin pointed out ...

XD this was just great Dono. I agree with Caitlin, the first part was a lot funnier. But this is still funny. Great job. :)

Heh heh. This is really funny Dono. Yes, random, but entirely funny. :)

Thanks for pointing out my errors guys :D Now, if I fix them is another story. lol I know I won't now cause it's 2 AM. And I'm lazy :P ...

wow...just...wow...

O_O I hate Jacob now! He's so evil!!! Poor Marius! I hope he's okay. Him and Quinn are really cute!! Ok, Sig, I'm gonna be waiting for Jacob to die! ...

I edited my mistakes. Thanks Alainna. And yes, This is just Ch.1. sorta. Thanks for reading and commenting guys

Wow. I liked it Ash. And for a first poem it was pretty good. I mean, yes, you have room for improvement, but you definitely have some talent. Keep it ...