Lindsaroo

This was really nice to read. I have to admit that the last line really threw me off. I was kinda like "Huh? wtf?" But I like random endings and ...

haha This is very cute. ^_^ I love how you switch at the end and make Mr. Po a dog. It's very suprising and I all in all really liked ...

This was ok, just you need to read over your work and fix all your grammar mistakes. It's not too nice on the eyes when it's got so many errors. ...

Aw Man Jared, I really liked this. I really wish I had more time to review it for you but I need to go to bed. But I still wanted ...

I like this. Yeah it's short, but some really deep emotion can come from just a single line. Very good.

Awwww I liked this. It was a very cute and sweet story. Very nice to read. I think you ended it perfectly. ^_^ Nice Job.

Awww I love poems like this because they're so innocent. It's really cute and childish. It's a very nice poem. :)

I'm sharing the same thoughts as everyone I think. It was very cute and funny. Some of it seemed a bit forced but it was still very nice. Keep it ...

woah woah woah woah waoh! I swear I read this and commented...god I'm losing it. >.< Anyhars, this is really cute, Qui. In a "Yellow Bus Monster" kind of way. ...

Ok wait. When did you post this and why didn't you tell me it was so good?! Qui dear, I really love this. You are so good at this stuff. ...

haha I really liked this poem. It was a bit confusing to read until I realized it was meant to be like that. It's a fun little thing and I ...

Ok I'm going to stick my opinion out here. I really don't think this was bad. It rhymed...and that's a good thing right? No but really, it was nice. I ...

This was really good. Um...I liked how you kept to a pattern and still made it a really nice poem. And it was just...good. I really don't know what to ...

Oh this is a really great poem. I love the rhymes and everything. I don't really know what to say except that it was good. Um...yeah... Keep up the good ...

Aww laf, this is really good. Your boyfriend is a good poet. I think it flowed really well and I don't see anything wrong with it. It's got a nice ...