Lindabelle

Thanks RedRaven, I'll make note of that and see what I can do :)

AMAZING! you are such a good writer, I hope you win!

Thanks for the review! I changed those things you noticed :)

Hey you! I just reviewed your peice right now! Hope you don't think I was too harsh! I really liked it though :)

Thank you very much! I'm trying my hand at poems, but really I love to write stories, although I have difficulty finishing them :P

Aw thanks guys! I'm currently writing the next part right now! :) I'll be sure to post it ASAP!

Hey TearsOnYourFace! Yeah I'm trying to decide where I want to base this story. I realize England is pretty far-fetched since I have no clue how English people talk. She ...

Really? Well I feel like once you live someplace for a long time it's hard to understand other mannerisms from other countries. But with some research I shall succeeed! :P ...

Ok that was such a good review! Seriously! Hey do you have any ideas about where I should set the storyline? I picked England because secretly I want to live ...

I know I had trouble with the title, I was so eager to post it that I didn't take time on it. Suggestions are welcome however! :)

Thank you very much!

Thanks guys!

Thak you!

Thanks guys! I will take your advice and work on the things mentioned above. Thanks for taking the time to read this over and help me out with my mistakes. ...

I like this one a lot too. It's simple, to the point and it doesn't try to force the message on the reader. Good job!