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Re: Flight 764-Chapter 1
Hey! This is really nice and interesting so far! I love the way you started it. It made me want to read more :D There we're a couple of things ...
Apr 29, 2011 -
Re: District XIII - Prologue
I'm in love with the hunger games! I'm glad I found this. Anyways, It was great! But, i have a couple of tips. You said: Said a lot...For example, Haymitch ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: The Second Quell [ 1 ]
I love the hunger games and I'm so glad I found a fan-fiction about it! It's really great so far and I love the idea of Haymitch's games. It was ...
Apr 23, 2011 -
Re: Glee Chapter 1 - The Boy is Mine
I love glee! I'm so glad you made a fan-fiction about it. A few tips though, you said that Quinn whipped her hair at Rachel multiple times. Maybe you could ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Jerk
This is very good but, you should try to tell more of a story. I love the message you wrote about and it's very true and original. Also, I found ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Confession Is Good For The Soul (Part 2)
Truly, Great! Again, it's very detailed and very interesting. I caught one thing though. It was realer than ever I'm not sure realer is a word...But you could try saying ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Best Friend..yeah right
This is so amazing! And very true. I love poems that tell a story. The rhymes we're great and made it more interesting but, there we're a couple of words ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Warriors Fanfic
This is really good! Very interesting. I have a few suggestions though. At the end of the chapter you kind of just cut off. You should try maybe adding some ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Confession Is Good For The Soul (Part 1)
This is really interesting and you put a lot of detail in it! Keep up the good work! I did notice something though, Of course I elected to stay with ...
Apr 21, 2011