LilyJamey

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Ish, I agree with Angel. It ended too soon. The memory of the journey to Thackeray Mansion was set deep in Anne’s marrow, such was the cruel penetration of the ...

Hey, thanks for critiquing my story. Just thought I'd drop by and help you out. There is nothing Carah hates more than sports games, but oh, the things she do ...

Lily here. I'm gonna be reviewing your work today... Let us commence! We had known each other as friends. We knew each other as friends. “Tara!” I exclaimed. “How could ...

Cute, it's funny. Sounds like something I'd dream of if I had a dog. But what if I knocked over my glass, spilt ice water over both of us, or ...

Oh, this chapter was quite good, but there are some mistakes. and the small amount of space in between his house and the next one was overgrown and choked with ...

I never critiqued a poem before, so bear with me here. If I crit wrong, tell me, ok? Lust pales the darkest minds, to leave the known worlds beside. "beside", ...

Ook, just wanted to ask you: are you posting chapter for chapter, or is this in random order? Because I don't see the connection with the previous one. My hand ...

Forced myself to crit. Constructive criticism is hard when the chapter is good, and it certainly is. Nevertheless! I will do it. “Anne?” she said, the concern evident in every ...

Okay, I've already promised myself to review this. I've been following this for quite a while now. Critiquing will make me feel less guilty about my lack of previous reviews. ...

Because I have a tendency to start stories and then stop when I "lose the mood", I've decided to make my stories short, but with potential to be expanded. Ugh, ...

Thanks for posting this, Via, or I never would realise how many people share the same kind of experience. Once when I was 8, and once when I was 12. ...

Kirsten! I will so totally kill you for saying nobody likes Jane Eyre. It's one of the best books ever written! A fellow Les Miserables fan. At last. I like ...

Oh you MUST read Jane Eyre! It seriously made me cry at the part where she reaches the crossroads. Don't think I'm a wimp, it was just really, really sad. ...

Hah, I knew it! Mr Murdoch wasn't all he was painted to be, after all. Mr Murdoch glanced up in the distance at the yellow-tiled roof, speckled with black grains, ...