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Hey,atr99!Here for a review... Loved your poem. Especially the way you used birds and wings to describe love. The poem is simply beautiful. But i think you can do a ...

Hey,Steggy! It's Lily here for a review.I liked your poem..interested me.But I think you could do some editing so that it'd get a bit more clearer for the readers. So ...

Wow!!!that's a awesome one!!! Love your brain..the way it works..XD. Never in a million years did something amazing like that strike me.Hey!we can write bout science too!!....:) Since you stress ...

Hey,Alliyah! Lily here for a review. It’s an amazingly beautiful poem. I never even though about my hands in any of those angles,really appreciable great work! But I think there ...

Hey,Buddy!!!.. A really touching poem...dude you got me goosebumps!!!!:( Just wish nobody has to go through such things...^ ^ "I want something I cannot have, Your bright eyes and tightly ...

Hey,It's Lily here for a review. You've penned a really beautiful poem.I like the title which fits into your poem perfectly. This time I'd like to review the poem piece ...

Hey...It's lily here....It's an Amazing poem sabyemerald. The way you described your feelings is appreciable.Your word choice added to the beauty of the poem. Hey,but I didn't get the last ...

Hey,it's lily here for a review. Iamawriter you are indeed an amazing writer. I loved reading your poem with those rhymes you used. I would like to tell a few ...

Hey,it's lily here for a review. Your poem"Tsunami treasures" is a touching piece. I loved the way you used the idea of a tsunami to describe that particular situation of ...

Hey,SoundofMind!!!!! That was awesome...I like the way you use different words to describe things,events and situations.I literally lived your world while reading it....your story slightly reminds me