LilPWilly

Wow, very enigmatic. I love it. I just saw your message. I like the formatting, putting the last word by itself, and making a meta ABBCB formatting with the stanzas ...

Wow! Hate to say it but my first thought was MINECRAFT. I like this a lot. So many profound statements, most especially the last two lines and 'her/god'. Very excellent. ...

Dang I like this a lot. Your pacing, your flow from emotion to emotion is very powerful. The message is poignant. The metaphor of a life preserver is well executed, ...

This is so good! I feel the same. My only critique is in the last paragraph, I think circulating air throws off the poem rhythmically, switches the attention momentarily to ...

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I think I get it. The coffee is ‘worldliness’ or whatever, right? I feel the same. My parents wouldn’t let me listen to my music, see my friends, or even ...

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Wow I like what you did there loll I also love the tone that underpins all of your poems, or maybe it’s the writing style, it gives me a certain ...

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There’s a lot of genius in here—raw emotion indescribable by a thousand words, but given here between the lines. I could use a little more tension myself. Just yank it, ...

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This is beautiful. It’s ironic, how the world in her head feels so much more real, but it is, the light shines through everything and fantasy is the poor man's ...

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Turkey Joebob picked an apple. The Apple turned around and said, “hey kid, I’m the king of the apples around here”. WHAT?! He had arms and legs!! “Can you help ...

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I feel that Actually I was wondering the same thing. The other day I realized that I wasn’t myself, and that my emotions were just not present. I think it’s ...

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Beautiful sensory work. I love this type of poem, where you’re addressing something so deep, as explained by the blurb, but have such a myriad of feelings coursing through its ...

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Same typos and disbelievable grammar, but I like how you are developing the relationships between the last few chapters, I can see the story slowly forming, although the pace is ...

Great writing, again, and although your characters aren’t deep (yet), they are comprehensible and entertaining. Your word choice is great, but I can only attribute the overly academic language to ...

Dang, good writing. I like how the introvert is quick with words and handles herself in social situations, and I like how you don’t make too big a deal out ...

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Masterful. The flow and rhymes are excellently selected, the topic and words are passionate and relatable, and you shove the physical into the heart. I might go ahead and read ...