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Re: As Frail as Snow
Well, there must be something really wrong for the weatherless land to have snow. ;p
Oct 20, 2015 -
Re: Undergoing "Repeated Time"
I don't see the change. ;-; I only changed "turns" with "becomes".
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Undergoing "Repeated Time"
The tenses, I think, are inconsistent when it comes to the part "yesterday, today, and tomorrow" to show how the lines relate to the time, hence the italicized parts. "He ...
Oct 15, 2015 -
Re: Undergoing "Repeated Time"
Can you explain why they don't match up correctly? And why the second version isn't good?
Oct 14, 2015 -
Re: dying
Thanks! Please Like my poem! :D
Oct 9, 2015 -
Re: dying
Thank! Please Like my poem! :D
Oct 9, 2015 -
Re: dying
Thanks for the review! Please Like this poem if you like it! :D
Oct 8, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 2.1]
Thanks again! :D
Oct 4, 2015 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 2.1]
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're still following this novel. :3
Oct 4, 2015 -
Re: let's get drown
Lol okay. I've checked with the Syllable Counter and it said two tho. Whatevs. xD
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: let's get drown
Lol thanks.
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: let's get drown
Nah, I'm just borrowing the other poem's title - the context is different. ;) "Of many" has two syllables? How can I not know this? I thought it's three! :o ...
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: From Stars to the Fireplace
Ah, so that's why there are lines! xD
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: the fear of drowning in gravity
I understand the literal meaning of all of them but not the underlying one. o-o
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: the fear of drowning in gravity
This poem is too deep that I don't understand some of it. xD
Oct 3, 2015